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Message de justinee posté le 08-02-2012 à 14:18:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
j'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et j'aimerais que quelqu'un m'aide à me corriger et pourquoi pas me dire ce qu'il en pense
Merci pour votre aide.
Sujet : Devrait-on dire la vérité dans toutes les circonstances ?
( je n'ai pas encore fait d'introduction )
No, we should told the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion on't telle the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we sould told the truth. Already our parents repeat us when we was little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finall know sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she brokes her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) was a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't want prevent her. They told her when she is better and she absolutely leave to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead ad she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too had to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think musn't tell another lier, just othing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be know
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Edited by lucile83 on 08-02-2012 18:23
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Message de justinee posté le 08-02-2012 à 14:18:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
j'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et j'aimerais que quelqu'un m'aide à me corriger et pourquoi pas me dire ce qu'il en pense
Merci pour votre aide.Sujet : Devrait-on dire la vérité dans toutes les circonstances ?
( je n'ai pas encore fait d'introduction )
No, we should told the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion on't telle the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we sould told the truth. Already our parents repeat us when we was little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finall know sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she brokes her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) was a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't want prevent her. They told her when she is better and she absolutely leave to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead ad she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too had to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think musn't tell another lier, just othing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be know
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Edited by lucile83 on 08-02-2012 18:23
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Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de bernard02, postée le 08-02-2012 à 14:34:45 (S | E)
Bonjour,
No, we should told the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion on't telle the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we sould told the truth. Already our parents repeat us when we was little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finall know sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she brokes her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) was a generalized cancer. Her fourteen (14 ? ) children didn't want prevent her. They told her when she is better and she absolutely leave to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead ad she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too had to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think musn't tell another lier, just othing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be know
J'ai juste regardé les grosses fautes et je les ai mises en rouge. Commençons déjà par le plus simple!
Bon courage.
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de justinee, postée le 08-02-2012 à 14:51:42 (S | E)
Hello,
No, we should told the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't tell the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we sould désolée je ne vois pas quoi mettre d'autre told the truth. Already our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally know sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she brokes her neck of the thighbone, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) has a generalized cancer. Her fourteen (14 ? oui 14 ^^) children didn't want prevent her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leave to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to ( c'est " pour moi" non ? ) my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier, just nothing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be know
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-02-2012 18:25
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de bernard02, postée le 08-02-2012 à 15:12:27 (S | E)
Désolé mais "femoral neck" était correct. Je reprends votre dernier envoi mais que pour les grosses fautes encore:
No, we should told (si c'est should, on ne peut pas avoir told) the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't tell the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we sould (que signifie SOULD ,) désolée je ne vois pas quoi mettre d'autre told the truth. Already our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally know sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she brokes her neck of the thighbone, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) has a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't want prevent her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leave to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to ( c'est " pour moi" non ? ), my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier, just nothing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be know
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de gerondif, postée le 08-02-2012 à 18:16:39 (S | E)
Hello, Justinee
You translate: "nous ne devons rien dire" " We owe nothing to say "!
You translate: "ses 14 enfants ne voulaient pas la prévenir" " Her fourteen children didn't want prevent her.
Be careful how you use your tranlating tools, dictionary or translator ! I have the impression that translating machines sometimes make mistakes !
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de lucile83, postée le 08-02-2012 à 18:27:33 (S | E)
Hello justinee,
A propos de vérité...avez-vous utilisé un traducteur en ligne?
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de justinee, postée le 08-02-2012 à 19:11:49 (S | E)
J'ai utilisé mon dictionnaire .. Et je demande de l'aide pour corriger pour ne pas avoir recours aux traducteurs sur internet .
No, we should tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't tell the truth is as a means of protection . We owe nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we should désolée ce sont des fautes de frappe tell the truth. Already our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally knows sooner or later. I think keep the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn me that : the truth is important. My grandmother was at hospital because she broke (c'est le verbe ou la conjugaison qui ne va pas ? her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( his son ) has a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't warn her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leaves to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. After, to ( c'est " pour moi" non ? ), my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier, just nothing and wait the good time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always be knows
J'espére que ça va mieux
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-02-2012 22:41
OK, je me posais la question car votre traduction était parfois bizarre
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de gerondif, postée le 08-02-2012 à 19:34:54 (S | E)
Hello,
No, we should(l'auxiliaire devrait être négatif) tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't(infinitif requis) tell the truth is as(comme au sens d'une comparaison) a means of protection . We owe nothing to say (to owe: devoir de l'argent. Connaissez vous "must"?)if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
( c'est court je sais mais bon je pense qu'il faut plus dire la vérité .. )
Yes, we should tell the truth. Already our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally knows(la vérité est connue et nn pas connait) sooner or later. I think keep(gérondif, ing) the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has learn(to learn = apprendre pour un élève, vous voulez dire enseigner) me that :
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier, just (verbe?)nothing and wait the good time(le bon moment?good ne va pas). Anyway as they say : the truth will always be knows(ne se dit pas. L'expression marche avec le verbe come out)
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de justinee, postée le 08-02-2012 à 19:50:30 (S | E)
No, we shouldn't tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't( do ??) tell the truth is as(comme au sens d'une comparaison) a means of protection . We must ( je voulais varier
) nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.Yes, we should tell the truth. Already our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally by ? knows(la vérité est connue et nn pas connait) sooner or later. I think keeping the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has teachhas brokenher femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle her songot a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't warn her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leaves to (sens? partir de l'hopital)the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. So,to my mind it's different between(parce qu'il y a une différence entre les histoires de famille et celle d'amis, j'en conclus que je peux l'enlever,il n'est pas nécessaire ?) family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier, just tell nothing and wait the best time). Anyway as they say : the truth will always come out
Merci !
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de gerondif, postée le 08-02-2012 à 20:10:03 (S | E)
alors....
No, we shouldn't tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't( do ??) tell (infinitif complet ou gérondif)the truth is as(comme au sens d'une comparaison) a means of protection . We must+ verbe dire + complément rien) nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
Yes, we should tell the truth. Already(mal placé) our parents repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally by ?(c'est le verbe être??) knows sooner or later. I think keeping the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has teach (participe passé)....... has broken her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( her son ) got a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't warn her. They told her when she was better and (quand elle quitta l'hôpital? prétérit, donc)she absolutely leaves to (sens? partir de l'hopital)the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. So,to my mind it's different between family story and friend story(ne se dit guère) but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lier(un menteur), just tell(mauvais choix) nothing and wait (construction de to wait ?)the best(quel est le contraire de wrong?) time). Anyway as they say : the truth will always come out.
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de justinee, postée le 08-02-2012 à 20:29:13 (S | E)
No, we shouldn't tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't to tell the truth is as a means of protection . We must said nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
Yes, we should tell the truth. Our parents already repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally is knows sooner or later. I think keeping the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has tought has broken her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( her son ) got a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't warn her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leaves to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. So,to my mind it's different between family story and friend story(ne se dit guère) but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lie just tell nothing and to wait the right ?( time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always come out.
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de gerondif, postée le 08-02-2012 à 22:06:20 (S | E)
Well,
No, we shouldn't tell the truth when it doesn't matter. In my opinion don't to tell the truth is as a means of protection . We must said nothing to say if we are not sure because that may hurt the person.
Yes, we should tell the truth. Our parents already repeated us when we were little " it's not good to lie " . Moreover, most of the time when we lie, the truth finally is knows sooner or later. I think keeping the truth for us isn't a good idea. For example, a recent story in my family has tought(manque un morceau) has broken her femoral neck, during her rehabilitation my uncle ( her son ) got a generalized cancer. Her fourteen children didn't warn her. They told her when she was better and she absolutely leaves to the hospital. The problem is they lied again, they just told(conjuguez say) " He is sick " . Today, he is dead and she couldn't see him before. Now she has a grudge against us. So,to my mind it's different between family story and friend story but the result is the same.
Sometimes the truth is too hard to hear, so it's better to say nothing but I think we musn't tell another lie just tell nothing and to wait(manque une préposition: f**) the right time. Anyway as they say : the truth will always come out.
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de notrepere, postée le 09-02-2012 à 05:47:25 (S | E)
BonjourCette tournure de phrase ne va pas :
Our parents already repeated us when we were little
On dirait: Our parents often told us when we were young "it's not good to lie"
Réponse: Correction/ dire la vérité de justinee, postée le 09-02-2012 à 17:50:45 (S | E)
Bonjour, merci à tous de m'avoir aidé malheureusement je m'y suis prise trop tard puisque je l'ai rendu dans la journée ...
La prochaine fois je posterai mon travail avant
Encore merci à tous !
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