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Message de aramia1 posté le 06-02-2012 à 17:50:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaite avoir votre avis (et vos propositions de correction) sur ma lettre de motivation pour un poste d’hôtesse de l'air. Par avance je vous remercie.
A bientôt.
Recently awarded the diploma of the Attestation of Cabin Crew Initial Safety Training, I look for an opportunity in the sector of the aeronautics.
I always wanted to become flight attendant.
My previous employment allowed me to increase my capacities to work as much in team as in a autonomous, responsible and organized way.
At the same time, my personal activities allowed me to develop my availability, my sense of the listening and the adaptability.
Convinced of my professional self-fulfillment in the exercise of this fascinating job, I shall be delighted to explain you during an interview my motivations to integrate your company and my desire to involve there.
Looking forward to a favorable answer, I am held at your disposal.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2012 17:55
Message de aramia1 posté le 06-02-2012 à 17:50:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaite avoir votre avis (et vos propositions de correction) sur ma lettre de motivation pour un poste d’hôtesse de l'air. Par avance je vous remercie.
A bientôt.
Recently awarded the diploma of the Attestation of Cabin Crew Initial Safety Training, I look for an opportunity in the sector of the aeronautics.
I always wanted to become flight attendant.
My previous employment allowed me to increase my capacities to work as much in team as in a autonomous, responsible and organized way.
At the same time, my personal activities allowed me to develop my availability, my sense of the listening and the adaptability.
Convinced of my professional self-fulfillment in the exercise of this fascinating job, I shall be delighted to explain you during an interview my motivations to integrate your company and my desire to involve there.
Looking forward to a favorable answer, I am held at your disposal.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2012 17:55
Réponse: Motivation/Flight attendant de gerondif, postée le 06-02-2012 à 19:46:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
normalement, je devrais juste vous montrer vos erreurs...., j'ai corrigé en vert mais pas amélioré le texte parfois maladroit.
Dear.........,
I have recently been awarded the "Attestation of Cabin Crew Initial Safety Training" diploma,and so I am looking for an opportunity in the sector of
I have always wanted to become a flight attendant.
My previous employment allowed me to increase my capacities to work as much in a team as in an autonomous, responsible and organized way.
At the same time, my personal activities allowed me to develop my availability, my sense of
Convinced of my professional self-fulfillment in the exercise of this fascinating job, I
Looking forward to a favorable answer, I am
Yours sincerely,
Réponse: Motivation/Flight attendant de gerondif, postée le 06-02-2012 à 22:26:59 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
variante de votre lettre:
Dear Sir,
after recently passing the "Attestation of Cabin Crew Initial Safety Training" degree ,I am now looking for a job in aeronautics as I have always wanted to become a flight attendant.
My previous job gave me the opportunity to improve my abilities both in team work as well as in single work as I am autonomous, responsible and organized .
At the same time, my personal activities allowed me to develop my availability, my sense of listening and my adaptability.
Convinced of my professional self-fulfillment in the exercise of this fascinating job, I would be delighted to meet you for an interview and explain to you my motivation to integrate your company and my desire to be involved in it.
I hope you will give me a favorable answer.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
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