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Message de tgone posté le 08-12-2011 à 19:10:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
veuillez s'il vous plaît bien vouloir me dire les fautes que j'ai sûrement faites en tapant ce texte.
Merci d'avance.
I chose this picture because it is an image that brings back good memories. we can see the players of the team of om when they win the championship of France. we can also see players who are very happy to have won this championship. This trophy is round with a ball in the center of the trophy. Behind the players we can see that confetti out of the stadium. It's been awhile since we had more to win this trophy. Also the same year we won the League Cup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-12-2011 20:14
Message de tgone posté le 08-12-2011 à 19:10:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
veuillez s'il vous plaît bien vouloir me dire les fautes que j'ai sûrement faites en tapant ce texte.
Merci d'avance.
I chose this picture because it is an image that brings back good memories. we can see the players of the team of om when they win the championship of France. we can also see players who are very happy to have won this championship. This trophy is round with a ball in the center of the trophy. Behind the players we can see that confetti out of the stadium. It's been awhile since we had more to win this trophy. Also the same year we won the League Cup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-12-2011 20:14
Réponse: Correction/Football team de gerondif, postée le 08-12-2011 à 23:57:48 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
I chose this picture because it is an image that brings back good memories. we can see the players of the team of om (the O.M team)hen they win the championship of France.((j'aurais dit the French championship " mais je n'y connais rien en football) we can also see players who are very happy to have won this championship. This trophy is round with a ball in the center of the trophy. Behind the players we can see that confetti (manque un verbe: ils sortent, ils tombent, ....)out of the stadium. It's been awhile since we had more (sens de la phrase ?? ah,je viens de comprendre:" cela fait longtemps que nous n'avons plus gagné", alors c'est faux: more signifie plus au sens de davantage.)to win this trophy. The same year we also won the League Cup.
Réponse: Correction/Football team de tgone, postée le 09-12-2011 à 12:39:46 (S | E)
merci beaucoup
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