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Message de boubou2805 posté le 30-11-2011 à 18:32:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
pour mon exmane d'anglais je dois décrire une personne de mon choix.
Pouvez-vous m'aider, corriger mes erreurs ou me donner des pistes pour les corriger et quelques idées pour étoffer mon texte s'il vous plaît ? N'hésitez pas tout est bon à prendre les bonnes comme les mauvaises choses !
Her name is Laura, she is 16. Laura is tall and slim. She has an oval, pale face and she is got blue eyes. Laura's hairs are long and wavy. She has a small nose and her ears are also small. She has got a very nice smile. Laura didn't have a tatoo and a scar but she has a mole under his right eye.
Laura is punctual, ambitious and hard-working bur she is shy and reserved. Finally Laura is nice and good-looking.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses !
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Modifié par boubou2805 le 30-11-2011 18:33
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-11-2011 18:37
Message de boubou2805 posté le 30-11-2011 à 18:32:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
pour mon exmane d'anglais je dois décrire une personne de mon choix.
Pouvez-vous m'aider, corriger mes erreurs ou me donner des pistes pour les corriger et quelques idées pour étoffer mon texte s'il vous plaît ? N'hésitez pas tout est bon à prendre les bonnes comme les mauvaises choses !
Her name is Laura, she is 16. Laura is tall and slim. She has an oval, pale face and she is got blue eyes. Laura's hairs are long and wavy. She has a small nose and her ears are also small. She has got a very nice smile. Laura didn't have a tatoo and a scar but she has a mole under his right eye.
Laura is punctual, ambitious and hard-working bur she is shy and reserved. Finally Laura is nice and good-looking.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses !
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Modifié par boubou2805 le 30-11-2011 18:33
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-11-2011 18:37
Réponse: Examen/description de notrepere, postée le 30-11-2011 à 19:11:37 (S | E)
HelloHer name is Laura, she is 16. Laura is tall and slim. She has an oval, pale face and she is got blue eyes. Laura's hairs are long and wavy. She has a small nose and her ears are also small. She has got a very nice smile. Laura
Laura is punctual, ambitious and hard-working bur she is shy and reserved. Finally Laura is nice and good-looking.
Réponse: Examen/description de boubou2805, postée le 30-11-2011 à 19:19:28 (S | E)
Voici la correction de mon texte ! merci "notrepere"
Her name is Laura, she is 16. Laura is tall and slim. She has an oval, pale face and she has got blue eyes. Laura's hair is long and wavy. She has a small nose and her ears are also small. She has got a very nice smile. Laura doesn't have a tattoo or a scar but she has a mole under her right eye.
Laura is punctual, ambitious and hard-working but she is shy and reserved. Finally Laura is nice and good-looking
Si vous voyez encore d'autres choses que je pourrais rajouter n'hésitez pas ! merci d'avance pour vos réponses !
Réponse: Examen/description de notrepere, postée le 30-11-2011 à 19:28:57 (S | E)
HelloHer name is Laura, she is 16. Laura is tall and slim. She has an oval, pale face and she has got blue eyes. Laura's hair is long and wavy. She has a small nose and her ears are also small. She has got a very nice smile. Laura doesn't have a tattoo or a scar but she has a mole under her right eye.
Laura is punctual, ambitious and hard-working but
I think it's perfect now.
Réponse: Examen/description de boubou2805, postée le 30-11-2011 à 19:53:20 (S | E)
Thank you very much for your help !!!
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