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Message de laures89 posté le 02-10-2011 à 21:21:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis lycéenne et j'ai écrit cette lettre de motivation afin de m'entraîner pour le Baccalauréat d'anglais.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez s'il vous plait, à trouver mes erreurs, et à les corriger...
Merci d'avance !
Voici la lettre que j'ai rédigée :
"Dear Sir or Madam,
At the moment I’m living in Mayotte to make Researches on the death of corals because the ocean and these mysteries are my passion! But I would like to gain more experience and alone, it’s difficult… Because of I would like to find work in your company Tara Oceans.
Before coming in Mayotte, I was studying in University Jean Monnet in France during four years. And there I was having a Professional Bachelor's Degree Protection (Water treatment environment). I was always fascinated by the ocean. Fishes, corals... This is for this reason that I’m coming in Mayotte who possesses one of the biggest coral reefs. I travelled a lot but on islands especially.
I believe to have the others quality who could be useful for the work for which I apply. I know that the work requires of the patience, the commitment and the will. I have already volunteered for two projects on the causes and the consequences of the death of corals during four months in Mayotte. I will be really happy to do all the tasks required to help the projects as I think it will be extremely educational for me. Because I’m young and I have not a lot of experience. The environmental protection is my passion and I would like to help you.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely, "
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-10-2011 21:43
Message de laures89 posté le 02-10-2011 à 21:21:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis lycéenne et j'ai écrit cette lettre de motivation afin de m'entraîner pour le Baccalauréat d'anglais.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez s'il vous plait, à trouver mes erreurs, et à les corriger...
Merci d'avance !
Voici la lettre que j'ai rédigée :
"Dear Sir or Madam,
At the moment I’m living in Mayotte to make Researches on the death of corals because the ocean and these mysteries are my passion! But I would like to gain more experience and alone, it’s difficult… Because of I would like to find work in your company Tara Oceans.
Before coming in Mayotte, I was studying in University Jean Monnet in France during four years. And there I was having a Professional Bachelor's Degree Protection (Water treatment environment). I was always fascinated by the ocean. Fishes, corals... This is for this reason that I’m coming in Mayotte who possesses one of the biggest coral reefs. I travelled a lot but on islands especially.
I believe to have the others quality who could be useful for the work for which I apply. I know that the work requires of the patience, the commitment and the will. I have already volunteered for two projects on the causes and the consequences of the death of corals during four months in Mayotte. I will be really happy to do all the tasks required to help the projects as I think it will be extremely educational for me. Because I’m young and I have not a lot of experience. The environmental protection is my passion and I would like to help you.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely, "
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-10-2011 21:43
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