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Message de suzon10 posté le 18-09-2011 à 20:41:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous.
J'ai écrit un petit texte sur Lady Gaga car je dois présenter un oral de 2 min 30 environ sur un chanteur de notre choix et justifier ce choix.
Voici mon texte :
Lady gaga
Stefani Joanne angelina Germanotta, known her stage name Lady Gaga. The Queen Song "Radio Ga Ga" inspired her stage name, "Lady Gaga". She is an American who was born 28 march 1986 in New York. Her nationality is Italian. She is an American pop singer- songwriter. With the singles “just dance” and “Poker Face” of the album “the fame” in 2008, she become a populary star. The album reached number one at the top of six countries. She was realized three album “The fame”, “The fame monster”, and “Born Way”. She is inspired by glam rock singers like David Bowie and Freddie Mercury to sing, then Mickael Jackson and Madonna to dance. Lady gaga was Known too for exentric look (Her hair at times green, red, her cloth) she Often compared to Gwen Stefani. And her look and their original video clip. She like to provoke !!
I love lady gaga because like her style musical and her exentric.
Pourriez-vous m'aider en le corrigeant?
Je vous en remercie par avance.
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-09-2011 20:42
Message de suzon10 posté le 18-09-2011 à 20:41:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous.
J'ai écrit un petit texte sur Lady Gaga car je dois présenter un oral de 2 min 30 environ sur un chanteur de notre choix et justifier ce choix.
Voici mon texte :
Lady gaga
Stefani Joanne angelina Germanotta, known her stage name Lady Gaga. The Queen Song "Radio Ga Ga" inspired her stage name, "Lady Gaga". She is an American who was born 28 march 1986 in New York. Her nationality is Italian. She is an American pop singer- songwriter. With the singles “just dance” and “Poker Face” of the album “the fame” in 2008, she become a populary star. The album reached number one at the top of six countries. She was realized three album “The fame”, “The fame monster”, and “Born Way”. She is inspired by glam rock singers like David Bowie and Freddie Mercury to sing, then Mickael Jackson and Madonna to dance. Lady gaga was Known too for exentric look (Her hair at times green, red, her cloth) she Often compared to Gwen Stefani. And her look and their original video clip. She like to provoke !!
I love lady gaga because like her style musical and her exentric.
Pourriez-vous m'aider en le corrigeant?
Je vous en remercie par avance.
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-09-2011 20:42
Réponse: Correction/texte à l'oral de gerondif, postée le 18-09-2011 à 21:29:55 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Stefani Joanne angelina Germanotta, .....known as Lady Gaga, her stage name . (manque un verbe: est connue sous le nom de)
The Queen Song "Radio Ga Ga" inspired her stage name, "Lady Gaga". She is an American **** (chanteuse) who was born 28 march 1986 (prononcer on the twenty-eighth of March, nineteen eighty-six)in New York. Her nationality is Italian(impossible: elle est italienne). She is an American pop singer- songwriter. With the singles “just dance” and “Poker Face” of the album “the fame” in 2008, she become (prétérit) a populary star. The album reached number one at the top of six countries. She was (en trop, à supprimer)realized three album(pluriel) “The fame”, “The fame monster”, and “Born Way”. She is(was) inspired by glam (ce mot existe-t-il pour dire glamorous?)rock singers like David Bowie and Freddie Mercury to sing, then Mickael Jackson and Madonna to dance. Lady gaga was Known too for her exentric looks (Her hair at times green, red, her cloth(cloth=le tissu, clothes= les vêtements)) she is often compared(voix passive, elle est souvent comparée à) to Gwen Stefani. And her look and their original video clip (il n'y a pas de verbe dans cette phrase, et à qui se réfèrent her et their?). She likes to provoke !!
I love lady gaga because I like her style musical (l'adjectif épithète doit précéder le nom) and her exentric (excentricité, pas excentrique, c'est un nom, pas un adjectif).(répéter love et like dans la même phrase, l'un justifiant l'autre, est bien maladroit)
Réponse: Correction/texte à l'oral de suzon10, postée le 22-09-2011 à 20:42:34 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup! ces corrections m'ont beaucoup aidée lors de mon oral.
C'est trés gentil de votre part !
Cordialement
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