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Message de taranghiano posté le 11-07-2011 à 20:44:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous me confirmer si ce texte est ok ?
Merci.
Dear xxxxx
How are you ? long time last since my visit in brewery…. I have good time in your city !
What ‘s your position now in your company?
We would like to start activity in your country and we are looking for an local distributor who could take care about local legislation and logistic.
Bye any case Do you know a local company which is already involve in food industry and be interested in distributing our product and services ?
Hope to see you again soon !
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-07-2011 21:29
Message de taranghiano posté le 11-07-2011 à 20:44:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous me confirmer si ce texte est ok ?
Merci.
Dear xxxxx
How are you ? long time last since my visit in brewery…. I have good time in your city !
What ‘s your position now in your company?
We would like to start activity in your country and we are looking for an local distributor who could take care about local legislation and logistic.
Bye any case Do you know a local company which is already involve in food industry and be interested in distributing our product and services ?
Hope to see you again soon !
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-07-2011 21:29
Réponse: Correction mail de notrepere, postée le 11-07-2011 à 22:00:44 (S | E)
HelloHow are you ? (It has been a) long time
What's your position now in your company?
We would like to start activity [pas le bon verbe] in your country and we are looking for an local distributor who could take care about [mauvaise préposition] local legislation and logistics.
Bye any case [In any case??] Do you know of a local company which [ok, mais je préfère 'that'] is already involved in the food industry and (that) would be interested in distributing our product [only one product?] and services ?
Réponse: Correction mail de taranghiano, postée le 11-07-2011 à 23:55:10 (S | E)
Merci pour les remarques....ok; alors je propose :
1.
We would like to start an activity in your country
ou peut-être mieux :
We would like to start business in your country
2. We are looking for an local distributor who could take care OF local legislation and logistics.
3. By any case : je voulais dire 'par hasard' ou 'par tout hasard'
Je propose d'utiliser 'By any chance'
Est-ce bien correct comme ceci ?
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-07-2011 08:02
Réponse: Correction mail de stammer, postée le 12-07-2011 à 00:25:00 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
I have to say that "I have a good time in your city" doesn't make sense, surely "I had a good time in your city" would be better?
Instead of: "We would like to start business in your country" I would say "We would like to expand our business into your country" or "We would like to start a business in your country".
Here 'par hasard' can be best translated as "Do you happen to know of a local company", leave out "By any case" etc..
James
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Modifié par stammer le 12-07-2011 00:25
Réponse: Correction mail de notrepere, postée le 12-07-2011 à 00:53:54 (S | E)
Hello stammerI have a good time in your city could be used when recalling a past memory.
As in "I always have a good time when I visit your city". It depends on the intended meaning. Since T says "It has been a long time..." one assumes that T has been to X city before.
Réponse: Correction mail de may, postée le 15-07-2011 à 03:23:44 (S | E)
Bonsoir
3. By any case : je voulais dire 'par hasard' ou 'par tout hasard'
Je propose d'utiliser 'By any chance'
On peut dire aussi Just in case you know.....or By chance, do you know...
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