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Message de viveleslangues posté le 07-06-2011 à 22:29:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis nouveau et je suis a la recherche d'un peu d'aide pour la correction de ma lettre de motivation. Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance!
Dear Miss, Madam, Sir
Tracking Code
214967-057
In response to your advertisement of the 4 April for the proposition of Administrative Assistant in Marketing with your firm.
My studies provided me skills required in the advertisement. During my education I had to work with different teams having several kind of skills. I could see you are looking for a person able to make scheduling, thanks to my previous experiences I have got this abilities.
As you can see in my resume, I have some experience in marketing thanks to my internships in 2008. Since then, I worked in different companies and different sectors to get as many skills as possible. Moreover I created some events and worked in Cairo as a team manager in a paintball company, which developed my abilities to adapt in different environments.
I wish to work in your firm for two reasons, firstly I am pretty sure I match perfectly for it, I have the skills and knowledge required, secondly this job will offer me the opportunity to work abroad, what I am looking for.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely
Bonne soirée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-06-2011 06:07
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Réponse: Cover letter de may, postée le 11-06-2011 à 03:31:15 (S | E)
Dear Miss, Madam, Sir
Tracking Code
214967-057
In response to your advertisement of/autre prép. the 4th of April for the proposition/position? of Administrative Assistant in Marketing (with your firm).
My studies provided me skills required in the (advertisement)job descriptions. During my education I had to work with different teams having several kind of skills. (I could see) As you are looking for a person need a pronoun and a verb able to make scheduling, thanks to my previous experiences I have got this/plural form abilities.
As you can see in my resume, I have some experience in marketing thanks to my internships in 2008. Since then, I worked in different companies and different sectors to get as many skills as possible. Moreover I created some events and worked in Cairo as a team manager in a paintball company, which developed my abilities to adapt in/autre prép. different environments.
I wish to work in your firm for two reasons, firstly I am pretty sure I match perfectly for it/the position, I have (the) skills and knowledge required......, secondly this job will offer/give me the opportunity to work abroad, that is what I am looking for.
I look/present continuous forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely
(...) to be left out
Bonne chance.
Réponse: Cover letter de abracadabra, postée le 12-06-2011 à 14:44:25 (S | E)
Hello,
Resume = reprendre
Summary = résumé
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-06-2011 15:09
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