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Message de cup0306 posté le 12-05-2011 à 23:34:13 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je souhaite avoir des avis sur mon CV qui est destiné aux USA... Tous les conseils et toutes les remarques sont les bienvenus
Merci pour vos réponses.
K*** M*****
adresse
tel home
gsm
mail
OBJECTIVE :
Obtain a graphic designer job in the field of advertising
SUMMARY :
10 years expérience in prépress, photo engraving (helio, flexo, offset) in the field of packaging design
EDUCATION :
Formation Graphiste internet 2000
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
web site conception, up-to-date data
Baccalauréat Professionnel artistique et métiers des arts communication graphique 1999
(French HIGH SCHOOL Diploma)
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
Advertising, learning multiprocess, layout/design
CAP dessinateur d'éxécution en publicité 1997
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
graphic art, layout, slogan, typography
EXPERIENCES
Cxxx (advertising agence) Lxxx 2005- Present
- Template, execution, packaging creation, sleeve, PLV, Chromie.
- Costumer relationship management
- Order reception and dispatching
- Final evaluation (quality, delay...)
Oxxx (Printing industry) Lxxx 2001 - 2005
- Studio photo-engraving (hellio, offset)
Pré press operator, layout workflow production one line, planning, control quality, archive service
Exxx Txxx FRANCE 2001
- Costumer relationship
- signalling devices
High School "Lxxx" Axxx FRANCE- 2000
- creation and achievement of the school's website
Pxxxxx FRANCE - 1999
- Project finishing
- Offset, PAO
Dxxxx FRANCE 1998 - 1999
- Serigraphy
- costumer relationship
Sxxx FRANCE-1994
- Photography
SKILLS AND INTEREST
ARTISTIC SKILLS
logo creation, typography, photography, design
COMPUTER SKILLS
Photoshop, illustrator, acrobat pro, in desing,art pro esko, webway, nexus, oris, cyberduck, cumulus, tricatalog.
Experienced with Macintosh
LANGUAGE SKILLS
French first language
Italian Fluent
English
INTEREST
Art, Design, Photos, Internet, Art Exposition, reading, family.
COSTUMER RELATIONSHIP
Fxxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Txxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Exxxxxxxx du Luxembourg
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2011 23:40
Anonymat
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2011 08:48
Message de cup0306 posté le 12-05-2011 à 23:34:13 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je souhaite avoir des avis sur mon CV qui est destiné aux USA... Tous les conseils et toutes les remarques sont les bienvenus
Merci pour vos réponses.
K*** M*****
adresse
tel home
gsm
OBJECTIVE :
Obtain a graphic designer job in the field of advertising
SUMMARY :
10 years expérience in prépress, photo engraving (helio, flexo, offset) in the field of packaging design
EDUCATION :
Formation Graphiste internet 2000
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
web site conception, up-to-date data
Baccalauréat Professionnel artistique et métiers des arts communication graphique 1999
(French HIGH SCHOOL Diploma)
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
Advertising, learning multiprocess, layout/design
CAP dessinateur d'éxécution en publicité 1997
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
graphic art, layout, slogan, typography
EXPERIENCES
Cxxx (advertising agence) Lxxx 2005- Present
- Template, execution, packaging creation, sleeve, PLV, Chromie.
- Costumer relationship management
- Order reception and dispatching
- Final evaluation (quality, delay...)
Oxxx (Printing industry) Lxxx 2001 - 2005
- Studio photo-engraving (hellio, offset)
Pré press operator, layout workflow production one line, planning, control quality, archive service
Exxx Txxx FRANCE 2001
- Costumer relationship
- signalling devices
High School "Lxxx" Axxx FRANCE- 2000
- creation and achievement of the school's website
Pxxxxx FRANCE - 1999
- Project finishing
- Offset, PAO
Dxxxx FRANCE 1998 - 1999
- Serigraphy
- costumer relationship
Sxxx FRANCE-1994
- Photography
SKILLS AND INTEREST
ARTISTIC SKILLS
logo creation, typography, photography, design
COMPUTER SKILLS
Photoshop, illustrator, acrobat pro, in desing,art pro esko, webway, nexus, oris, cyberduck, cumulus, tricatalog.
Experienced with Macintosh
LANGUAGE SKILLS
French first language
Italian Fluent
English
INTEREST
Art, Design, Photos, Internet, Art Exposition, reading, family.
COSTUMER RELATIONSHIP
Fxxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Txxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Exxxxxxxx du Luxembourg
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2011 23:40
Anonymat
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2011 08:48
Réponse: Correction /CV de notrepere, postée le 13-05-2011 à 02:19:30 (S | E)
Hello Proper nouns must be capitalized (the names of software). I also suggest capitalizing the names of degrees. You might want to translate your degrees into English (I've offered some suggestions). Bonne chance
OBJECTIVE :
To obtain a graphic designer job in the field of advertising
SUMMARY :
10 years experience in prepress, photo engraving (Helio, Flexo, Offset) in the field of packaging design
EDUCATION :
Formation Graphiste Internet (Internet Graphics Training) 2000
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
website conception, up-to-date data [Que voulez-vous dire?]
Baccalauréat Professionnel Artistique et Métiers des Arts Communication Graphique 1999
(French HIGH SCHOOL Diploma)
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
Advertising, learning multiprocess
, layout/designCAP Dessinateur d'éxécution en Publicité (Design Implementation in Publicity) 1997
FRANCE-Axxx-Mxxx
Graphic arts, layout, slogan, typography
EXPERIENCE : [sans s]
Cxxx (advertising agency) Lxxx 2005- Present
- Template, execution, packaging creation, sleeve, PLV, Chromie.
- Costumer relationship management
- Order reception and dispatching
- Final evaluation (quality, delay...)
Oxxx (Printing industry) Lxxx 2001 - 2005
- Studio photo-engraving (hellio, offset)
Prepress operator, layout workflow production one
line, planning, quality control, archive service Exxx Txxx FRANCE 2001
- Costumer relationship
- signalling devices
High School "Lxxx" Axxx FRANCE- 2000
- creation and achievement [pas le bon mot] of the school's website
Pxxxxx FRANCE - 1999
- Project finishing
- Offset, PAO
Dxxxx FRANCE 1998 - 1999
- Serigraphy [orthographe]
- costumer relationship
Sxxx FRANCE-1994
- Photography
SKILLS AND INTERESTS
ARTISTIC SKILLS
logo creation, typography, photography, design
COMPUTER SKILLS
Photoshop, Illustrator, Acrobat Pro, InDesign, Artpro/Esko, Webway, Nexus, Oris
, Cyberduck, Cumulus, Tri-CATLAOG.Experienced with Macintosh
LANGUAGE SKILLS
French first language
Italian Fluent
English
INTERESTS
Art, Design, Photos, Internet, Art Exposition, Reading, Family.
COSTUMER RELATIONSHIP
Fxxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Txxx (France, Ireland, Italia, Hungary , spain, Germany , Portugal, Scandinavia…)
Exxxxxxxx du Luxembourg
Réponse: Correction /CV de cup0306, postée le 13-05-2011 à 08:07:36 (S | E)
Thanks a lot for your correction,
up-to-date data; je voulais dire mettre à jour des données, mais je ne sais pas comment dire.
Merci
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2011 10:34
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Réponse: Correction /CV de notrepere, postée le 13-05-2011 à 16:53:20 (S | E)
Hello
Ah, OK. Maybe "updating of information"?
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