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Message de mistigri posté le 11-05-2011 à 19:40:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
N'étant pas très forte en anglais j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu mais il y a trop d'incohérences.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il vous plaît?
Thank you for your help.
xx "So can you remind me the problems that you are currently experiencing in your company?"
x "We're facing difficulties within our teams, indeed after the establishment of quality assurance that is relatively new our staffs see this as a constraint. All this impact our teams and that the highest to the lowest level of responsibility»
xx "What to tell you is that you're back in a process of improvement and that your team must understand and integrate into their work and not see this as a constraint. "
x "Yes many people do not understand what they say permanent monitoring too demanding because it requires time and this impacts their work. "
xx "Indeed, there is a partitioning and a barrier to acceptance of quality within your group. But today every business must take responsibility for these problems and treat them as priority actions for non-compliance with internal "
x "What I advise you to do or put in place to reduce this dysfunction that becomes increasingly important? "
xx "Change is difficult to accept because it is in human nature, but I think that without investment, innovation and better business has no future. "
x "I hear that's why I'm here today, your advice is precious"
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2011 19:56
Message de mistigri posté le 11-05-2011 à 19:40:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
N'étant pas très forte en anglais j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu mais il y a trop d'incohérences.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il vous plaît?
Thank you for your help.
xx "So can you remind me the problems that you are currently experiencing in your company?"
x "We're facing difficulties within our teams, indeed after the establishment of quality assurance that is relatively new our staffs see this as a constraint. All this impact our teams and that the highest to the lowest level of responsibility»
xx "What to tell you is that you're back in a process of improvement and that your team must understand and integrate into their work and not see this as a constraint. "
x "Yes many people do not understand what they say permanent monitoring too demanding because it requires time and this impacts their work. "
xx "Indeed, there is a partitioning and a barrier to acceptance of quality within your group. But today every business must take responsibility for these problems and treat them as priority actions for non-compliance with internal "
x "What I advise you to do or put in place to reduce this dysfunction that becomes increasingly important? "
xx "Change is difficult to accept because it is in human nature, but I think that without investment, innovation and better business has no future. "
x "I hear that's why I'm here today, your advice is precious"
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2011 19:56
Réponse: Correction/dialogue de notrepere, postée le 12-05-2011 à 06:41:38 (S | E)
Helloxx "So can you remind me of the problems that you are currently experiencing in your company?"
x "We're facing difficulties within our teams, [point] Indeed, after the establishment of quality assurance,
xx "What I can tell you is that you're back in a process of improvement and that your team must understand and integrate this into their work and not see this as a constraint. "
x "Yes many people do not understand what they say permanent monitoring too demanding [ces mots n'ont pas de sens] because it requires time and this impacts their work. "
xx "Indeed, there is a partitioning and a barrier to acceptance of quality within your group. But today every business must take responsibility for these problems and treat them as priority actions for non-compliance with internal [cette phrase ne me semble pas complète] "
x "What I advise you to do or put in place to reduce this dysfunction that becomes increasingly important? [cette phrase n'est pas en forme d'une question: What do you advise me to do...
] "xx "Change is difficult to accept because it is in human nature, but I think that without investment, innovation and better business has no future [ces mots n'ont pas de sens]. "
x "I hear that's why I'm here today, your advice is precious [pas le bon adjectif en anglais]"
Réponse: Correction/dialogue de mistigri, postée le 12-05-2011 à 10:49:14 (S | E)
merci pour la correction
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