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Message de andaskape posté le 09-03-2011 à 00:41:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger cet exercice s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
To : Sadie Summers ; Samantha Carter ; Tom Anderson ; [...]
From : Emma Tapping ***@****
Subject : Former schoolmates meeting?
Cc :
Bcc :
Attached :
Hi guys!
How are you ? I was thinking about send you a message, and I finally did it! I hope you're well and not too busy with your children! Sadie, congratulations on your wedding day! We wish you both every happiness in your new life together! Samantha, it was great to see you in Edinburgh. Do you always see this guy... hum O'neill (if I remember well) ??
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. Life has been very hectic of late and it's not getting any quieter! Yesterday I looked at photos I've found in a shoebox (look the "attached"). We were so cute!!! I remember all of time we spent together. I suggest we all get together a weekend to discuss over a drink. How about a weekend visit in March ?
Andrew and I send our best to all of you. We both hope to see you very soon.
Love.
XoXo (153 words)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-03-2011 06:23
Message de andaskape posté le 09-03-2011 à 00:41:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger cet exercice s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
To : Sadie Summers ; Samantha Carter ; Tom Anderson ; [...]
From : Emma Tapping ***@****
Subject : Former schoolmates meeting?
Cc :
Bcc :
Attached :
Hi guys!
How are you ? I was thinking about send you a message, and I finally did it! I hope you're well and not too busy with your children! Sadie, congratulations on your wedding day! We wish you both every happiness in your new life together! Samantha, it was great to see you in Edinburgh. Do you always see this guy... hum O'neill (if I remember well) ??
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. Life has been very hectic of late and it's not getting any quieter! Yesterday I looked at photos I've found in a shoebox (look the "attached"). We were so cute!!! I remember all of time we spent together. I suggest we all get together a weekend to discuss over a drink. How about a weekend visit in March ?
Andrew and I send our best to all of you. We both hope to see you very soon.
Love.
XoXo (153 words)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-03-2011 06:23
Réponse: Correction/ e-mail de notrepere, postée le 09-03-2011 à 01:55:37 (S | E)
BonsoirTrès bien, pas beaucoup de fautes...
Hi guys!
How are you ? I was thinking about send [forme +ing] you a message, and I finally did it! I hope you're well and not too busy with your children! Sadie, congratulations on your wedding day! We wish you both every happiness in your new life together! Samantha, it was great to see you in Edinburgh. Do you always (still?) see this guy... hum O'neill (if I remember well (correctly?)) ??
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. Life has been very hectic of late and it's not getting any quieter! Yesterday I looked at photos I've found (simple past) in a shoebox (look (see) the "attached"). We were so cute!!! I remember all of time we spent together. I suggest we all get together a (one) weekend to discuss over a drink. How about a weekend visit in March ?
Andrew and I send our best to all of you. We both hope to see you very soon.
Réponse: Correction/ e-mail de andaskape, postée le 09-03-2011 à 02:24:33 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup de la rapidité de la réponse
Hi guys!
How are you ? I was thinking about sending you a message, and I finally did it! I hope you're well and not too busy with your children! Sadie, congratulations on your wedding day! We wish you both every happiness in your new life together! Samantha, it was great to see you in Edinburgh. Do you still see this guy... hum O'neill (if I remember well) ??
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. Life has been very hectic of late and it's not getting any quieter! Yesterday I looked at photos I'd found in a shoebox (see the "attached"). We were so cute!!! I remember all of time we spent together. I suggest we all get together one weekend to discuss over a drink. How about a weekend visit in March ?
Voilà, est-ce correct maintenant ???
Réponse: Correction/ e-mail de notrepere, postée le 09-03-2011 à 04:04:44 (S | E)
HelloC'est bon, j'ai manqué quelques corrections:
Yesterday I looked at some photos I'd found in a shoebox (see the "attached"). We were so cute!!! I remember all of [article] time we spent together. I suggest we all get together one weekend to discuss [verbe trop formel; je suggère un autre verbe comme 'reminisce'] over a drink. How about a weekend visit in March ?
Cordialement
Réponse: Correction/ e-mail de andaskape, postée le 09-03-2011 à 10:41:52 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, tout est corrigé
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