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Message de olyday posté le 15-02-2011 à 17:32:23 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je dois faire un paragraphe sur le thème : " Si tu avais à vivre dans un pays étranger, lequel choisirais-tu ? Pourquoi ? "
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci par avance.
If I had the opportunity to go and live in a foreign country, I would choose England for two main reasons: the English language is universal and I like very much the English mentality. Furthermore, it’s not very far from France but it’s ( tout de même ? ) a totally different
country in life habits. We thus learn to live in a different way. Indeed, English eat earlier, at not fixed o'clock and eat often salty in the breakfast. I find that England is a country of freedom with very different landscapes as well as a very green country.
In England, we can go to big cities as London for example where there is a lot of excitement, many stores and many historic monuments or museums to be visited but we can also go in out-of-tje-way places where the silence reigns, where the atmosphere is quiet and where life is enjoyable. I think that England is a country with full of wealth and a big variety in population. Furthermore, people are welcoming and smiling. We can make it any kind of activities and sports. That's why I would like to go and to live in England.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-02-2011 17:33
Message de olyday posté le 15-02-2011 à 17:32:23 (S | E | F)
Hello,Je dois faire un paragraphe sur le thème : " Si tu avais à vivre dans un pays étranger, lequel choisirais-tu ? Pourquoi ? "
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci par avance.
If I had the opportunity to go and live in a foreign country, I would choose England for two main reasons: the English language is universal and I like very much the English mentality. Furthermore, it’s not very far from France but it’s ( tout de même ? ) a totally different
country in life habits. We thus learn to live in a different way. Indeed, English eat earlier, at not fixed o'clock and eat often salty in the breakfast. I find that England is a country of freedom with very different landscapes as well as a very green country.
In England, we can go to big cities as London for example where there is a lot of excitement, many stores and many historic monuments or museums to be visited but we can also go in out-of-tje-way places where the silence reigns, where the atmosphere is quiet and where life is enjoyable. I think that England is a country with full of wealth and a big variety in population. Furthermore, people are welcoming and smiling. We can make it any kind of activities and sports. That's why I would like to go and to live in England.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-02-2011 17:33
Réponse: Country/ Correction de gerondif, postée le 15-02-2011 à 23:09:12 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
If I had the opportunity to go and live in a foreign country, I would choose England for two main reasons: the English language is universal and I like the English mentality very much . Furthermore, it’s not very far from France but it’s ( nevertheless:neammoins /still: pourtant ) a totally different
country in life habits. We thus learn to live in a different way. Indeed, the (ou English people sans article) English eat earlier, at not fixed o'clock and eat often salty (mettre un nom derrière salty) in the breakfast. I find that England is a country of freedom with very different landscapes as well as a very green country.
In England, we can go to big cities as London for example where there is a lot of excitement, many stores and many historic monuments or museums to be visited but we can also go in out-of-tje-way places where
Réponse: Country/ Correction de olyday, postée le 16-02-2011 à 17:04:50 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide !!!!
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