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My parents !!! Correction
Message de olyday posté le 16-11-2010 à 12:33:19 (S | E | F)
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte sur mes parents s'il vous plaît ?
Je vous remercie par avance !
I can’t do without my parents. Indeed, I’m an only child and therefore I am very close to my parents. It is not always easy to be an only child because my parents are very protective with me and they always want to know when I am. However, to be an only child admits some advantages because I am a spoilt child and I don’t have to share my possessions with brothers and sisters. That’s why I have a very intense relation with my parents. We share everything together and we laugh a lot all three. I couldn’t live without my parents because they are always here for me and I can everything confide to them when I’m not very on form or when I have a problem. They are the only persons whom I can totally trust!
Message de olyday posté le 16-11-2010 à 12:33:19 (S | E | F)
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte sur mes parents s'il vous plaît ?Je vous remercie par avance !
I can’t do without my parents. Indeed, I’m an only child and therefore I am very close to my parents. It is not always easy to be an only child because my parents are very protective with me and they always want to know when I am. However, to be an only child admits some advantages because I am a spoilt child and I don’t have to share my possessions with brothers and sisters. That’s why I have a very intense relation with my parents. We share everything together and we laugh a lot all three. I couldn’t live without my parents because they are always here for me and I can everything confide to them when I’m not very on form or when I have a problem. They are the only persons whom I can totally trust!
Réponse: My parents !!! Correction de dolfine56, postée le 16-11-2010 à 14:51:15 (S | E)
Hello,
I can’t do without my parents. Indeed, I’m an only child and therefore I am very close to my parents. It is not always easy to be an only child because my parents are very protective with me and they always want to know when I am. However, to be an only child admits some advantages because I am a spoilt child and I don’t have to share my possessions with brothers and sisters. That’s why I have a very intense relation with my parents. We share everything together and we laugh a lot all three. I couldn’t live without my parents because they are always here for me and I can everything confide to them when I’m not very on form or when I have a problem. They are the only persons whom I can totally trust!
when:pas le bon mot
admits:to give; to afford ?
can everything confide to them :mal dit
on form:mal dit
whom:pas indispensable;peut être supprimé.
it's up to you.
Réponse: My parents !!! Correction de dsmith, postée le 20-11-2010 à 12:03:29 (S | E)
Hello,
normalement la préposition avec protective est "of" pas "with"
I am protective of my children.
Voir par exemple cet article:
Lien Internet
an intense relation - à mon avis relationship est mieux.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-11-2010 12:22
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