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Message de natnan2206 posté le 06-11-2010 à 15:33:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et toutes,
Enfin un site éducatif, pratique et convivial cela va me permettre de progresser plus vite.
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger l'exercice suivant ;j'ai quelques lacunes.
Merci d'avance.
-Voici notre fille.Son prénom est Liz. .Elle a trente-deux ans et elle est très séduisante. . Elle est de taille moyenne et un peu dodue..Elle a un minuscule nez pointu , de grands yeux verts et ses cheveux sont mi-longs, blonds et ondulés.
Aujourd°hui, elle porte une jolie chemise rose avec une jupe courte et des chaussures à talons hauts.
Elle n°est pas casse-pieds et elle a beaucoup d°amis parce qu°elle est très gentille et drôle.
Here is our daughter. Her name is Liz. She is thirty-two years and she is very attractive. She is medium sized and little plump. (1 pt). She has got a tiny and pointed nose ,large green eyes and she has got medium length, blonde and wavy hair.
Today she is wearing a pretty pink shirt with a short skirt and high-heeled shoes.
she is not nuisance, and she has many friends because she is very nice and funny.
His name is Tom Bennet .Vanessa‘s uncle
His not be too old, he was born in chicago.
His hair is brown and short
He has got tiny blues eyes and a beard
He has got skinny legs
Today he is wearing a brown trouser with a tie.
He Likes his city but hates violence
He can play the piano but he doesn°t cooking
I get on well with him because it is a fantastic man.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2010 18:46
Message de natnan2206 posté le 06-11-2010 à 15:33:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et toutes,
Enfin un site éducatif, pratique et convivial cela va me permettre de progresser plus vite.
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger l'exercice suivant ;j'ai quelques lacunes.
Merci d'avance.
-Voici notre fille.Son prénom est Liz. .Elle a trente-deux ans et elle est très séduisante. . Elle est de taille moyenne et un peu dodue..Elle a un minuscule nez pointu , de grands yeux verts et ses cheveux sont mi-longs, blonds et ondulés.
Aujourd°hui, elle porte une jolie chemise rose avec une jupe courte et des chaussures à talons hauts.
Elle n°est pas casse-pieds et elle a beaucoup d°amis parce qu°elle est très gentille et drôle.
Here is our daughter. Her name is Liz. She is thirty-two years and she is very attractive. She is medium sized and little plump. (1 pt). She has got a tiny and pointed nose ,large green eyes and she has got medium length, blonde and wavy hair.
Today she is wearing a pretty pink shirt with a short skirt and high-heeled shoes.
she is not nuisance, and she has many friends because she is very nice and funny.
His name is Tom Bennet .Vanessa‘s uncle
His not be too old, he was born in chicago.
His hair is brown and short
He has got tiny blues eyes and a beard
He has got skinny legs
Today he is wearing a brown trouser with a tie.
He Likes his city but hates violence
He can play the piano but he doesn°t cooking
I get on well with him because it is a fantastic man.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2010 18:46
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de natnan2206, postée le 06-11-2010 à 17:57:46 (S | E)
Bonsoir personne pour m'aider?
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de laure95, postée le 06-11-2010 à 18:14:15 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je vais vous aider!
Here (out THIS) is our daughter. Her name is Liz. She is thirty-two years (avec old ou simplement "she is thirty-two") and she is very attractive. She is medium sized and a little plump. (1 pt). She has got a tiny and pointed nose ,large green eyes and she has got medium length (mid-long), blonde (orthographe)
Today she is wearing a pretty pink shirt with a short skirt and high-heeled (high heels) shoes.
she is not nuisance, and she has many friends because she is very nice and funny.
His name is Tom Bennet . (mettre 1 virgule) Vanessa‘s uncle
His not be too old (ça ne veut rien dire), he was born in chicago. (majuscule)
His hair is brown and short
He has got tiny (les adjectifs sont invariables en anglais) eyes and a beard
He has got skinny legs
Today he is wearing a brown trouser (les anglais considèrent qu'il y a 2 jambes donc ils mettent ce mot au pluriel) with a tie.
He Likes his city but hates violence
He can play the piano but he doesn°t cooking (revoir la forme négative du présent simple)
I get on well with him because it (ce n'est pas une chose) is a fantastic man.
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de natnan2206, postée le 06-11-2010 à 18:45:01 (S | E)
Merci pour votre réponse.
His not be too old, il est d'un certain âge; c'est ce que je veux dire.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2010 18:48
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de laure95, postée le 06-11-2010 à 18:55:21 (S | E)
Il est d'un certain âge: he's past his prime (humour) ou he's an elderly person.
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de natnan2206, postée le 06-11-2010 à 19:25:37 (S | E)
Merci pour vos réponses aussi rapide
J'ai effectué la correction pour le deuxième texte la voici est-ce exact?
His name is Tom Bennet .Vanessa‘s uncle
He’s an elderly person, he was born in Chicago.
His hair is brown and short
He has got tiny blue eyes and a beard
He has got skinny legs
Today he is wearing brown trousers with a tie.
He Likes his city but hates violence
He can play the piano but he doesn’t cook ou he isn’t cooking
I get on well with him because he is a fantastic man.
Réponse: Correction/ our daughter de laure95, postée le 07-11-2010 à 17:51:26 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
His name is Tom Bennet . (mettre 1 virgule à la place du point) Vanessa‘s uncle
He’s an elderly person, he was born in Chicago.
His hair is brown and short
He has got tiny blue eyes and a beard
He has got skinny legs
Today he is wearing brown trousers with (and) a tie.
He Likes his city but hates violence
He can play the piano but he doesn’t cook
I get on well with him because he is a fantastic man.
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