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Message de heros posté le 03-11-2010 à 21:09:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plait jeveux voudrais que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes d'orthographe et pourquoi pas me conseiller pour changer des mots.
me : I've bad toothache although I no longer eat sweets harmful to teeth , What do you think I should do ?
friend : If I were you I would address some of the pain sedatives , then I will see a dentist , but you have to know that don't eat sweets harmful to teeth isn't enough , you should wash your teeth with a toothpaste whenever you ate .
Je ne maitrise pas bien l'anglais , s'il vous plait aidez-moi !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2010 21:55
Message de heros posté le 03-11-2010 à 21:09:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plait je
me : I've bad toothache although I no longer eat sweets harmful to teeth , What do you think I should do ?
friend : If I were you I would address some of the pain sedatives , then I will see a dentist , but you have to know that don't eat sweets harmful to teeth isn't enough , you should wash your teeth with a toothpaste whenever you ate .
Je ne maitrise pas bien l'anglais , s'il vous plait aidez-moi !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2010 21:55
Réponse: Correction/orthographe de anne40, postée le 03-11-2010 à 22:46:20 (S | E)
Hello,
"Je ne maitrise pas bien l'anglais": moi non plus, mais je pense avoir trouvé quelques erreurs.
If I were you I would address (êtes-vous sûr??) some
(une question: whenever ou each time ?)
Réponse: Correction/orthographe de laure95, postée le 04-11-2010 à 18:47:00 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
me : I've a bad toothache although I no longer eat sweets harmful to teeth , What do you think I should do ?
friend : If I were you I would address some of the pain sedatives , then I will (utiliser le conditionnel) see a dentist , but you have to know that don't (faire de l'infinitif négatif: NOT + TO + BV) eat sweets
Réponse: Correction/orthographe de may, postée le 05-11-2010 à 00:54:09 (S | E)
Bonsoir
Quelques suggestions:
I've a bad toothache ...
Either I have (no contraction in present tense) or I've had (present perfect)..
I no longer eat (present perfect)
Brush your teeth..
The sentence (of friend) is too long with a series of commas. Maybe, you can break it up with a full stop.
Best wishes,
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