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Message de romaing123 posté le 21-04-2010 à 18:28:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaite partir cet été en Angleterre pour faire un chantier et pour cela j'ai dû rédiger une lettre de motivation. Si certains d'entre vous pouvaient me proposer une correction j'en serais très reconnaissant.
Merci beaucoup.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to take part in this volunteers project because it represents a very interesting and enriching experience for me. Indeed, I enjoy meeting people, I am eager to discover other cultures, other countries. It think it would enable me to open my mind. Moreover, this volunteers project would allow me to put the collective interest served and to feel useful.
I have good social skills and I will do my utmost to share my own culture with others.
I think I am serious, autonomous, and also curious and open minded. Be attentive helpful and tolerant toward others is a priority for me.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2010 18:45
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Message de romaing123 posté le 21-04-2010 à 18:28:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaite partir cet été en Angleterre pour faire un chantier et pour cela j'ai dû rédiger une lettre de motivation. Si certains d'entre vous pouvaient me proposer une correction j'en serais très reconnaissant.
Merci beaucoup.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to take part in this volunteers project because it represents a very interesting and enriching experience for me. Indeed, I enjoy meeting people, I am eager to discover other cultures, other countries. It think it would enable me to open my mind. Moreover, this volunteers project would allow me to put the collective interest served and to feel useful.
I have good social skills and I will do my utmost to share my own culture with others.
I think I am serious, autonomous, and also curious and open minded. Be attentive helpful and tolerant toward others is a priority for me.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2010 18:45
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Réponse: Lettre de motivation correction de irishseb, postée le 25-04-2010 à 12:44:55 (S | E)
Hello, voici ma correction ( à vrai dire il n'y a pas énormément de fautes)
"Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to take part in this volunteers project because it represents a very interesting and enriching experience for me. Indeed, I enjoy meeting people, I am eager to discover other cultures, other countries. It think it would enable me to open my mind. Moreover, this volunteers project would allow me [to put the collective interest served] --> ?? (to serve the collective interest? ) and to feel useful.
I have good social skills and I will do my
I think I am serious, autonomous, and also curious and open-minded. Being attentive helpful and tolerant towards others is a priority for me.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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