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Message de shan9588 posté le 21-04-2010 à 03:36:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois faire un oral d'anglais sur l'avortement. Hi i gotta do a oral presentation on abortion. J'aimerais que vous véirifer si je n,ai pas fait de faute dans mon texte
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Teenagers who become mothers do not have great plans for the future. They are much more likely to leave school. Teens who become pregnant are less likely to attend college. Although teenage mothers today are more likely to finish high school or than in the past, teens with baby are less likely to attend college than teens who do not become pregnant. It clairy affects educationof the mother. Only a third of teen mothers earn their high school diploma. And only 1.5% of teen mothers have a college degree by age of 30. Also, they are more likely to end up on welfare .Nearly 80 percent of unmarried teen mothers end up on welfare.
When a teenage girl decide to not get a abortion, it affects her but not only her. In fact, It also affects their kids. 5 per cent of all live births in 2006 were to teenage mothers. The teenage moms babies has many chance to suffer medical problem. They are more likely to be premature or have low birth weight. The problems are not only in the beggining of theirs lifes. It also affects the future life of thoses kids. The sons of teen mothers are 13 percent more likely to end up in prison. Teen daughters are 22 percent more likely to become teen mothers themselves.
Message de shan9588 posté le 21-04-2010 à 03:36:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois faire un oral d'anglais sur l'avortement. Hi i gotta do a oral presentation on abortion. J'aimerais que vous véirifer si je n,ai pas fait de faute dans mon texte
.Teenagers who become mothers do not have great plans for the future. They are much more likely to leave school. Teens who become pregnant are less likely to attend college. Although teenage mothers today are more likely to finish high school or than in the past, teens with baby are less likely to attend college than teens who do not become pregnant. It clairy affects educationof the mother. Only a third of teen mothers earn their high school diploma. And only 1.5% of teen mothers have a college degree by age of 30. Also, they are more likely to end up on welfare .Nearly 80 percent of unmarried teen mothers end up on welfare.
When a teenage girl decide to not get a abortion, it affects her but not only her. In fact, It also affects their kids. 5 per cent of all live births in 2006 were to teenage mothers. The teenage moms babies has many chance to suffer medical problem. They are more likely to be premature or have low birth weight. The problems are not only in the beggining of theirs lifes. It also affects the future life of thoses kids. The sons of teen mothers are 13 percent more likely to end up in prison. Teen daughters are 22 percent more likely to become teen mothers themselves.
Réponse: Oral d'anglais de notrepere, postée le 21-04-2010 à 03:55:38 (S | E)
Hello. Bon travail! Presque parfait!Teenagers who become mothers do not have great plans for the future. They are much more likely to leave school. Teens who become pregnant are less likely to attend college. Although teenage mothers today are more likely to finish high school
[ ] Which word is missing? Un article, peut-être?
clairy = Oops! Le mot correct est ici, mais les lettres sont mélangées:
E A C L L Y R Qu'est-ce que c'est?
Réponse: Oral d'anglais de notrepere, postée le 21-04-2010 à 05:31:54 (S | E)
Hello! 
When a teenage
[a] article avant une voyelle
[decide] 3rd person singular
---->This would be a good sentence to put at the beginning of this paragraph.
The teenage moms babies = L'ordre de ces mots n'est pas d'idéal
Babies of teenage mothers serait mieux, je crois
[has] 3rd person plural
[chance] 3rd person plural
[beggining][theirs][lifes][thoses] une faute d'orthographe
[ ] un mot manque
[problem] plus qu'un problème?
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Modifié par notrepere le 21-04-2010 05:34
Réponse: Oral d'anglais de lucile83, postée le 21-04-2010 à 08:25:42 (S | E)
Hello,
J'ajouterai que l'ordre des mots n'est pas correct ici + l'article déjà indiqué par notrepere:
When a teenage girl decide to not get a abortion
Regards.
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