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Message de pop65 posté le 06-12-2009 à 00:29:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, voilà j'ai écrit un texte en anglais mais je suis sûr qu'il y a des fautes. Pourriez-vous m'aider à me coriger en m'indiquant mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
Je vous en suis très reconnaissant, merci beaucoup !
Everywhere, it’s happening like that because common tastes bring you together by a special and a favoured link. For example it’s nice to go to your favourite group’s concert with you friend who is fond of this kind of music too! Besides, if you know that a certain person has had a strange passed and did some unacceptable things which don’t agree with your principles, you wouldn’t want to befriend with him/her; it’s a normal attitude. A person who has just learned his/her friend had stolen one of his/her old friends could be afraid of being robbed too; in fact it’s difficult to trust in someone in this case. But the problem is, friendship is necessarily based on confidence. Moreover, if your friend has a similar background to yours, not only you will have interesting conversations but you understand you each other on the way of living and the sense of life.
Yet if you should choose your friends according to similar tastes, differences between persons can be enriching and give you another vision of life and world you can take advantage of. Moreover, your friend or your future friend can make you discover another leisure; for example a various kind of music. That’s why you should not be too exigent concerning your criterions of choice and to be open-minded. Differences between people are efficient to blossom yourself and to grow up by making fascinating finds.
Message de pop65 posté le 06-12-2009 à 00:29:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, voilà j'ai écrit un texte en anglais mais je suis sûr qu'il y a des fautes. Pourriez-vous m'aider à me coriger en m'indiquant mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
Je vous en suis très reconnaissant, merci beaucoup !
Everywhere, it’s happening like that because common tastes bring you together by a special and a favoured link. For example it’s nice to go to your favourite group’s concert with you friend who is fond of this kind of music too! Besides, if you know that a certain person has had a strange passed and did some unacceptable things which don’t agree with your principles, you wouldn’t want to befriend with him/her; it’s a normal attitude. A person who has just learned his/her friend had stolen one of his/her old friends could be afraid of being robbed too; in fact it’s difficult to trust in someone in this case. But the problem is, friendship is necessarily based on confidence. Moreover, if your friend has a similar background to yours, not only you will have interesting conversations but you understand you each other on the way of living and the sense of life.
Yet if you should choose your friends according to similar tastes, differences between persons can be enriching and give you another vision of life and world you can take advantage of. Moreover, your friend or your future friend can make you discover another leisure; for example a various kind of music. That’s why you should not be too exigent concerning your criterions of choice and to be open-minded. Differences between people are efficient to blossom yourself and to grow up by making fascinating finds.
Réponse: Correction - Friends de seb06000, postée le 06-12-2009 à 06:58:15 (S | E)
bonjour,
je vous donne quelques indications:
" Everywhere, it’s happening like that because common tastes bring you together by a special and a favoured link. For example it’s nice to go to your favourite group’s (voc) concert with you (il faut le possessif ) friend who is fond of this kind of music too!
Besides, if you know that a certain person has had a strange passed( voc) and did some unacceptable things which don’t agree (voc) with your principles, you wouldn’t want to be friend with him/her; it’s a normal attitude. A person who has just learned his/her friend had stolen one of his/her old friends could be afraid of being robbed too; in fact it’s difficult to trust in( voc => to trust someone) someone in this case.
But the problem is, friendship is necessarily based on confidence. Moreover, if your friend has a similar background to yours, not only you will have interesting conversations but you understand you( you inutile => to understand each other) each other on the way of living and the sense of life.
Yet if you should choose your friends according to similar tastes, differences between persons can be enriching and give you another vision of life and world you can take advantage of. Moreover, your friend or your future friend can make you discover another leisure; for example a various kind of music. That’s why you should not be too exigent( calque du français) concerning your criterions of choice and to be open-minded. Differences between people are efficient to blossom yourself( pas certain qu'on utilise cette image) and to grow up by making fascinating finds
Voilà!
Courage
sebastien
Réponse: Correction - Friends de titomm, postée le 06-12-2009 à 11:39:56 (S | E)
Bonjour...
Je voulais juste savoir ce que voulais dire cette partie de phrase: " common tastes bring you together by a special and a favoured link", car je n'arrive pas à en comprendre le sens...
Thank you... Have a nice day... Titomm
Réponse: Correction - Friends de pop65, postée le 06-12-2009 à 15:50:15 (S | E)
Merci !
Je voulais dire que les goûts communs nous unissent par un lien privilégié.
Réponse: Correction - Friends de pop65, postée le 07-12-2009 à 10:54:14 (S | E)
Bonjour, excusez-moi mais je voulais savoir si dans ce que j'ai écrit il y a des fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci !
Yet if you chose your friends according to similar tastes, differences between persons could also be enriching and give you another vision of life and world you can take advantage of. Moreover, your friend or your future friend can make you discover another leisure; for example a various kind of music. That’s why you should not be too demanding concerning your criterions of choice and to be open-minded. Differences between people are efficient to blossom yourself and to grow up by making fascinating discoverings.
Réponse: Correction - Friends de jillie, postée le 07-12-2009 à 13:34:24 (S | E)
bonjour
j'aurai besoin d'un petit coup de main sur des questions tags - n'est ce pas ?
He isn't going to like this, ....?
didn't he
did he
won't he
is he
After wprking so hard he didn't deserve to fail the exam ..... ?
doesn't he
did he
won't he
is he
Merci de votre aide
Réponse: Correction - Friends de kevinchicoutimi, postée le 07-12-2009 à 23:12:44 (S | E)
Bien joué pour les traductions ! Maintenant, allons donner un coup de main à Clemg7h, sur le texte science fiction ! A+ Les amis
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