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Message de rokili posté le 28-11-2009 à 12:07:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez-vous vérifier si je n'ai pas fait trop de fautes s'il vous plaît; c'est un résumé d'une compréhension orale. Merci et désolé d'avance si mon anglais est pathétique.
Carol is interviewed for tell his story.
Carol is a young woman, she was born in France. At the age of 16 years, she left her family to go to USA, and make these studies. She follows a program call “On the road”, which consists to studied and take to time off travel. She was studied the biology for 3 years at Humboldt State University in California, then she was travel hitchhiking in the all America.
But she ran out of money and has of the beginning to work.
She has got two bachelor’s degrees one in environmental engineering and one in biology. It was very hard for she to finish her studies, she compares this it a long journey!
Then she hit the road again for Nicaragua, she was a bit nervous because she don’t speak Spanish but a travel it well crossed. She makes friends with children and she to join women’s cooperative. In the end of interview she said that she wants learn to more about a country, travel more and meet more people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2009 14:24
Message de rokili posté le 28-11-2009 à 12:07:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez-vous vérifier si je n'ai pas fait trop de fautes s'il vous plaît; c'est un résumé d'une compréhension orale. Merci et désolé d'avance si mon anglais est pathétique.
Carol is interviewed for tell his story.
Carol is a young woman, she was born in France. At the age of 16 years, she left her family to go to USA, and make these studies. She follows a program call “On the road”, which consists to studied and take to time off travel. She was studied the biology for 3 years at Humboldt State University in California, then she was travel hitchhiking in the all America.
But she ran out of money and has of the beginning to work.
She has got two bachelor’s degrees one in environmental engineering and one in biology. It was very hard for she to finish her studies, she compares this it a long journey!
Then she hit the road again for Nicaragua, she was a bit nervous because she don’t speak Spanish but a travel it well crossed. She makes friends with children and she to join women’s cooperative. In the end of interview she said that she wants learn to more about a country, travel more and meet more people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2009 14:24
Réponse: Correction / interview de rokili, postée le 28-11-2009 à 14:37:59 (S | E)
Personne?
Réponse: Correction / interview de doubster, postée le 28-11-2009 à 14:59:08 (S | E)
she left her family to go to the USA, and makes her studies there.... wich consists in studiying and taking... she had studied biology... she traveled...and has began to work...hard for her to finish her studies... compares it as a long journey.. she didn't speak spanish... she joins women's coopertative...she wants to learn more about countries...
Réponse: Correction / interview de doubster, postée le 28-11-2009 à 15:02:19 (S | E)
il y a un petit melange de passe et de present. dans la 3eme phrase ce sera : "she followed a program call "on the road", wich consisted in studiying and taking time off to travel." j'espere que ca aide un peu
Réponse: Correction / interview de rokili, postée le 28-11-2009 à 15:21:12 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
Réponse: Correction / interview de cecil_ward, postée le 28-11-2009 à 18:40:05 (S | E)
Corrections to the corrections.
1) It's "consist of", never *"consist in".
2) "make studies" is not correct; the verb is just "to study" without "make". Example: He studied Maths at university.
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