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Message de l0urax posté le 25-11-2009 à 17:04:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si ce texte contient des fautes merci.
" For me, the best vacations are first taken without head, without worry and with my family. Holidays removed from civilization, far from any pollution. It also can visit monuments, discover new things .. Then what attracts many countries are warm, Guadeloupe, The Maldives to be able to relax, have good weather in the month of winter, the beach, the cocktail. There is also something that attracts me so much and that is not reserved for the elderly, it is the cruise liner, the Titanic has fascinated me and so far, this type of holiday would please me greatly. . In a magnificent ocean liner Queen Mary as the example. So finally, the ideal holiday for me are made without lead, away from the train train, with people we love and a very beautiful country. "
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 25-11-2009 17:11
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Message de l0urax posté le 25-11-2009 à 17:04:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si ce texte contient des fautes merci.
" For me, the best vacations are first taken without head, without worry and with my family. Holidays removed from civilization, far from any pollution. It also can visit monuments, discover new things .. Then what attracts many countries are warm, Guadeloupe, The Maldives to be able to relax, have good weather in the month of winter, the beach, the cocktail. There is also something that attracts me so much and that is not reserved for the elderly, it is the cruise liner, the Titanic has fascinated me and so far, this type of holiday would please me greatly. . In a magnificent ocean liner Queen Mary as the example. So finally, the ideal holiday for me are made without lead, away from the train train, with people we love and a very beautiful country. "
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 25-11-2009 17:11
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