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Correction globalization 2
Message de pop65 posté le 22-11-2009 à 18:47:09 (S | E | F)
Voici la deuxième partie.
Je vous remercie de prendre un peu de votre temps pour m'aider !
Nevertheless there are many advantages to date online, I’ve never met someone by Internet and I’m not intending to begin to do it because I think this way of meeting is impersonal and there are not the emotions and sensations you have at the first date, which make the date exciting. We’re not at the supermarket where we can choose any products we want according to their label. It’s absurd, love arrives without being provoked. Moreover, we’re not certain if the descriptions people give are true and really correspond to them. Indeed, it’s too easy to present our self as we want to appear and to lie in order to be more attractive. That’s why when you meet the person in the real life; you’re very often disappointed because you he/she isn’t as you have thought. Besides, the past has revealed the dangerousness of this kind of dating. As you don’t really know who is talking to you on the net, you’re not sure of his/her identity; his/her age, appearance etc. Therefore, at the first real date, you don’t know his/her real intentions… Many teenagers were missed after they had a date with an unknown person they had met online
Message de pop65 posté le 22-11-2009 à 18:47:09 (S | E | F)
Voici la deuxième partie.
Je vous remercie de prendre un peu de votre temps pour m'aider !
Nevertheless there are many advantages to date online, I’ve never met someone by Internet and I’m not intending to begin to do it because I think this way of meeting is impersonal and there are not the emotions and sensations you have at the first date, which make the date exciting. We’re not at the supermarket where we can choose any products we want according to their label. It’s absurd, love arrives without being provoked. Moreover, we’re not certain if the descriptions people give are true and really correspond to them. Indeed, it’s too easy to present our self as we want to appear and to lie in order to be more attractive. That’s why when you meet the person in the real life; you’re very often disappointed because you he/she isn’t as you have thought. Besides, the past has revealed the dangerousness of this kind of dating. As you don’t really know who is talking to you on the net, you’re not sure of his/her identity; his/her age, appearance etc. Therefore, at the first real date, you don’t know his/her real intentions… Many teenagers were missed after they had a date with an unknown person they had met online
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