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Correction d'un poster !!!!!!
Message de overshambles posté le 16-11-2009 à 20:21:47 (S | E | F)
Il faut que je fasse une description d'un poster de film que j'ai aimé.
Voici le poster que j'ai choisi : Lien Internet
Et voilà ma description, pouvez vous la corriger et me dire si certaines expressions ne sont pas biens dites ?! Et même si vous avez d'autres idées parce que je sèche ! Merci par avance !!!
This document is a poster which represents a German film which I liked a lot. In the center of the poster, we can see a man of back. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are shown the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. Behind the actor of back, we show us full of pupils who are all dressed in white and all pupils make the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film criticizes the dictatorship in Germany and it is a great film!
Message de overshambles posté le 16-11-2009 à 20:21:47 (S | E | F)
Il faut que je fasse une description d'un poster de film que j'ai aimé.
Voici le poster que j'ai choisi : Lien Internet
Et voilà ma description, pouvez vous la corriger et me dire si certaines expressions ne sont pas biens dites ?! Et même si vous avez d'autres idées parce que je sèche ! Merci par avance !!!
This document is a poster which represents a German film which I liked a lot. In the center of the poster, we can see a man of back. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are shown the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. Behind the actor of back, we show us full of pupils who are all dressed in white and all pupils make the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film criticizes the dictatorship in Germany and it is a great film!
Réponse: Correction d'un poster !!!!!! de aimelanglais, postée le 17-11-2009 à 11:40:16 (S | E)
This document is a poster which represents a German film which I liked a lot. In the center of the poster, we can see a man of back. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are shown the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. Behind the actor of back, we show us full of pupils who are all dressed in white and all pupils make the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film criticizes the dictatorship in Germany and it is a great film!
I liked : Tu l'aime toujours !
center ne me parait pas très correct : remplace le par milieu
shown : c'est un participe passé !
Conjugue show au présent BE + ing
it is a great film! : tu l'a déjà dit !
Réponse: Correction d'un poster !!!!!! de overshambles, postée le 17-11-2009 à 20:03:43 (S | E)
ÉNORME
pour votre aide qui m'a été très utile !! 
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