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Message de charlemagne91 posté le 14-11-2009 à 15:10:16 (S | E | F)
Hello,
je devais inventer la suite d'une conversation avec un père qui refuse que son fils devienne chanteur. Il fallait alterner du niveau de langue familier et courant et mettre des expressions d'opinion.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à le corriger ?
“Have you any idea how tough it is to succeed in the music business?”
“Doesn’t make fun of me, dad. I am going to fulfil my dream. You ate prejudiced against me and my band!
But you are irresponsible. I can’t see why you drop out. You will have a secure white- collar job, my son, want-you?”
“No way! Get off my back!”
“I am convinced that I just you teen age crises…”
“I disagree with you. I will rake in extra cash, that’s all! Trust me, I can make it. There is no doubt that I’m a good singer!”
“Your songs will be boring.”
“No, people don’t will be bored stiff!”
“Shut up. You don’t understand me because there is a generation gap between you and me. I don’t will sponge on you.”
“What I find most questionable are your bad friends and…”
“You are going too far. I will challenge you...”
The son cuts the communication, the phone rattles and the father hears to sizzle. Boys will be boys !
merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 14-11-2009 15:53
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Message de charlemagne91 posté le 14-11-2009 à 15:10:16 (S | E | F)
Hello,
je devais inventer la suite d'une conversation avec un père qui refuse que son fils devienne chanteur. Il fallait alterner du niveau de langue familier et courant et mettre des expressions d'opinion.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à le corriger ?
“Have you any idea how tough it is to succeed in the music business?”
“Doesn’t make fun of me, dad. I am going to fulfil my dream. You ate prejudiced against me and my band!
But you are irresponsible. I can’t see why you drop out. You will have a secure white- collar job, my son, want-you?”
“No way! Get off my back!”
“I am convinced that I just you teen age crises…”
“I disagree with you. I will rake in extra cash, that’s all! Trust me, I can make it. There is no doubt that I’m a good singer!”
“Your songs will be boring.”
“No, people don’t will be bored stiff!”
“Shut up. You don’t understand me because there is a generation gap between you and me. I don’t will sponge on you.”
“What I find most questionable are your bad friends and…”
“You are going too far. I will challenge you...”
The son cuts the communication, the phone rattles and the father hears to sizzle. Boys will be boys !
merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 14-11-2009 15:53
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Réponse: Refus (correction) de lililila93, postée le 14-11-2009 à 17:04:57 (S | E)
“Have you any idea how tough it is to succeed in the music business?”[find a better adjective]
“Doesn’t make fun of me, dad. I am going to fulfil my dream. You ate prejudiced against me and my band!
But you are so irresponsible. I can’t see why you dropped out (of school). You will have a secure white-collar job, my son, want-you?”[Come on, son! Dont' you want to...?]
Réponse: Refus (correction) de charlemagne91, postée le 15-11-2009 à 10:20:33 (S | E)
bonjour merci de votre aide.
pour la phrase 1, c'est celle du livre et je suis obligé de la garder.
pour la 2, l'erreur est "are" et pas ate.
Don' t you want to have a secure white-collar job, my son?
est-ce que c'est bon ?
y a t'il d'autre erreurs ?
merci de votre aide
Réponse: Refus (correction) de charlemagne91, postée le 16-11-2009 à 13:07:01 (S | E)
quelqu'un pourrait il m'aider ?
merci d'avance
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