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Message de doux posté le 30-08-2009 à 01:00:35 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
En fait, je viens d'écrire une lettre de motivation pour postuler une candidature au sujet de poste responsable achat et j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez les fautes de syntaxe, de grammaire,..Et si vous avez d'autres recommandations elles seront les bienvenues.
Voici la lettre :
Dear Sir,
I am graduated with a bachelor degree in transportation and logistics from XX University. I would like to apply for a purchasing assistant job.
I am a creative person and often think in a contemplative way about various issues of practical importance. My trainings allow me to provide added value in the fields of set-up of logistics operations. My communication skills are good and I like expressing ideas and concepts both in oral and written form an ideal platform for the dissemination of knowledge in my chosen field of specialization.
Detailed information about my academic record and other experience is attached to this statement.
I can be available for interview at your convenience, and look forward to meeting you. Please, don´t hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Merci d'avance!
P.S. Je suis nouveau diplomé et mes expériences sont sous forme de stages d'étude!
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