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Message de perledelarme posté le 10-04-2009 à 17:52:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire une lettre de motivation pour une fac de droit-anglais, et l'anglais n'étant pas ma langue maternelle, j'ai peur d'avoir fait de grosses fautes de style ou de grammaire. Ce serait vraiment très gentil si quelqu'un maitrisant très bien cette langue pourrait relire rapidement ma lettre et me dire s'il voit des lourdeurs ou des fautes.
Je vous remercie énormément par avance de votre précieuse aide.
Dear Mr/Ms/Mrs/miss,
I am writing to you in order to join your law university. I Would like a complete training, which will be able to develop my abilities. Furthermore, I would like to widen my training to the international. I'm of course willing to work a lot in order to reach my goals. I chose your university firstly because severals friends and professors advised me to do so. More over the open day allowed me to see your huge library, the very pleasant town and a atmosphere I like, which convinced me that I should choose you.
I'm sure to have the abilities, which will make me succeed. First of all, my scientist training allowed me to develop rigour, perfectionism, humility and curiosity. I always try to go into my work in dept. More over, I'm able to learn from my mistakes and I never give up. Secondly, I'm really keen of literature and arts. I know to write and organise a text so as to be understood. Indeed, I was published in severals magazines like Virgule or Phosphore. What's more, I develop an important literary culture and an interest for international actuality, history and arts. I'm also really fond of foreign cultures, that's why I chose to learn three languages. More over, I travel a lot in Europe, especially in United Kingdom. I'm really interested by english music and literature.
In a nutshell, I am persuaded I'll be able to succeed because I'm accustomed to work. I'm a girl so motivated, that if you allow me to try I'll perseve until the success.
Yours Faithfully
Miss C...
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Modifié par bridg le 10-04-2009 18:24
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Message de perledelarme posté le 10-04-2009 à 17:52:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire une lettre de motivation pour une fac de droit-anglais, et l'anglais n'étant pas ma langue maternelle, j'ai peur d'avoir fait de grosses fautes de style ou de grammaire. Ce serait vraiment très gentil si quelqu'un maitrisant très bien cette langue pourrait relire rapidement ma lettre et me dire s'il voit des lourdeurs ou des fautes.
Je vous remercie énormément par avance de votre précieuse aide.
Dear Mr/Ms/Mrs/miss,
I am writing to you in order to join your law university. I Would like a complete training, which will be able to develop my abilities. Furthermore, I would like to widen my training to the international. I'm of course willing to work a lot in order to reach my goals. I chose your university firstly because severals friends and professors advised me to do so. More over the open day allowed me to see your huge library, the very pleasant town and a atmosphere I like, which convinced me that I should choose you.
I'm sure to have the abilities, which will make me succeed. First of all, my scientist training allowed me to develop rigour, perfectionism, humility and curiosity. I always try to go into my work in dept. More over, I'm able to learn from my mistakes and I never give up. Secondly, I'm really keen of literature and arts. I know to write and organise a text so as to be understood. Indeed, I was published in severals magazines like Virgule or Phosphore. What's more, I develop an important literary culture and an interest for international actuality, history and arts. I'm also really fond of foreign cultures, that's why I chose to learn three languages. More over, I travel a lot in Europe, especially in United Kingdom. I'm really interested by english music and literature.
In a nutshell, I am persuaded I'll be able to succeed because I'm accustomed to work. I'm a girl so motivated, that if you allow me to try I'll perseve until the success.
Yours Faithfully
Miss C...
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Modifié par bridg le 10-04-2009 18:24
divers
