<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas
Résumé des vacances ça sent la rentrée
Message de recherche posté le 01-09-2008 à 19:56:11
Bonsoir!
Voilà j'ai fait un petit (même très petit
) résumé de mes vacances et j'aurais aimé que vous vérifiez s'il y a des fautes: merci!
During my holidays, I stayed at home but sometimes when it was sunny i went to the beach with my friends or I went camping with them. When it was raining I watched TV or I read books for school. Moreover, I spent a week in PARIS at my aunt but I didn't do interesting things.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2009 13:46
Message de recherche posté le 01-09-2008 à 19:56:11
Bonsoir!
Voilà j'ai fait un petit (même très petit
) résumé de mes vacances et j'aurais aimé que vous vérifiez s'il y a des fautes: merci!During my holidays, I stayed at home but sometimes when it was sunny i went to the beach with my friends or I went camping with them. When it was raining I watched TV or I read books for school. Moreover, I spent a week in PARIS at my aunt but I didn't do interesting things.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2009 13:46
Réponse: Résumé des vacances ça sent la rentrée de , postée le 01-09-2008 à 20:09:45
hello,
You know, when it comes to such tasks where you have to describe your holidays it doesn't really matter whether you tell the truth or not. What matters is to have an opportunity to use a language. So I suggest that you elaborate a bit on what you did or what you could possibly do in Paris, for example. The teacher won't carry out an investigation to find out whether it really happened but s/he will be glad that you put some effort to use rich vocabulary and advanced structures.
PS.1. Don't get me wrong, I'm not encouraging anyone to lie but just to practise the skill of using one's imagination in cases where we don't have much to say. It helps very often during oral exams when we're asked to give our opinion on some subject that we can't personally relate to. Then, if we are creative, we may come up with some ideas instead of saying that we've never had such and such experience
PS.2. at my aunt's
Réponse: Résumé des vacances ça sent la rentrée de , postée le 02-09-2008 à 06:55:00
Hi,
"I did not do anything interesting"
Réponse: Résumé des vacances ça sent la rentrée de micka, postée le 02-09-2008 à 20:41:28
As Inga said, you really should try to write more. You could try to reach 100-120 words, which would already be good.
