AIDEZ MOI SVP Histoire d'horreur anglais
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Message de lillies posté le 06-11-2024 à 21:48:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je suis censé faire une rédaction d'anglais, le sujet étant "inventez une histoire d'horreur"
Pouvez vous me signaler mes fautes s'il vous plait ?
It’s the story of a seven-year-old girl who walked alone in the forest at night.
She saw a house in the distance, she was cold, she decided to go and knock on the door.
An old lady quickly opened the door for her. She found the little girl with her pale skin and red eyes, frightening.
The grandmother asked her if she was hungry or thirsty or if we should call her parents.
The little one did not answer and went to sit at the table.
The grandmother understood that she was hungry and brought him a glass of milk and biscuits.
It was very late and as the little girl did not speak, the grandmother offered to sleep at home and bring her back tomorrow.
The next morning, the little girl was gone. The dishes and bed were made. The grandmother was worried, she wondered where the little girl had gone. The same evening, the little girl comes knocking at the door and was the same as the first night, drank, ate and went to sleep in the room.
The grandmother locked the door of the girl and kept the key in her pocket to be sure that she could not leave. But the next morning, to the great surprise of the grandmother, the little girl had disappeared again and had made her bed and dishes.
The grandmother was starting to get scared. She wondered who this little girl was and how she had gotten out of her room. When she ran out of milk, the grandmother went to the store to buy some. She discovered a poster of a little girl who had been missing for two hundred years. She looked like the little girl who came to her house every night.
In the evening, the grandmother waited for the girl to come. When the girl arrived again at the same time, the grandmother asked her: "My child, are you dead? "
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YES! LET ME IN!
MERCI D'AVANCE.
Message de lillies posté le 06-11-2024 à 21:48:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je suis censé faire une rédaction d'anglais, le sujet étant "inventez une histoire d'horreur"
Pouvez vous me signaler mes fautes s'il vous plait ?
It’s the story of a seven-year-old girl who walked alone in the forest at night.
She saw a house in the distance, she was cold, she decided to go and knock on the door.
An old lady quickly opened the door for her. She found the little girl with her pale skin and red eyes, frightening.
The grandmother asked her if she was hungry or thirsty or if we should call her parents.
The little one did not answer and went to sit at the table.
The grandmother understood that she was hungry and brought him a glass of milk and biscuits.
It was very late and as the little girl did not speak, the grandmother offered to sleep at home and bring her back tomorrow.
The next morning, the little girl was gone. The dishes and bed were made. The grandmother was worried, she wondered where the little girl had gone. The same evening, the little girl comes knocking at the door and was the same as the first night, drank, ate and went to sleep in the room.
The grandmother locked the door of the girl and kept the key in her pocket to be sure that she could not leave. But the next morning, to the great surprise of the grandmother, the little girl had disappeared again and had made her bed and dishes.
The grandmother was starting to get scared. She wondered who this little girl was and how she had gotten out of her room. When she ran out of milk, the grandmother went to the store to buy some. She discovered a poster of a little girl who had been missing for two hundred years. She looked like the little girl who came to her house every night.
In the evening, the grandmother waited for the girl to come. When the girl arrived again at the same time, the grandmother asked her: "My child, are you dead? "
…
…
…
YES! LET ME IN!
MERCI D'AVANCE.
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