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Message de buca17 posté le 20-10-2019 à 18:43:12 (S | E | F)
Hello,
It's my first post here,could you help me with this little text please ?
I am 31 years old and I just started learning English.
Thanks.
Every morning, I wake up at 4:30. I have breakfast. i eat bread, jam and butter. i drink coffee. After, I take a shower and I get dressed. Then I brush my teeth. I go to work at 5:30. I walk for 30 minutes. I am a teacher, I teach french in a language center in Colombia.
I finish work at 12:00. I walk back home and I have lunch. In the afternoon, i prepare my classes for the next day. To rest a little , I listen to music, I watch videos on Youtube (ou Youtube videos?) and i lay on my bed.
Sometimes, I go to the gym. I Have dinner; I take a shower and I read some things about languages and news.
I go to bed at 10:00
Tons of thanks !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2019 21:16
Message de buca17 posté le 20-10-2019 à 18:43:12 (S | E | F)
Hello,
It's my first post here,could you help me with this little text please ?
I am 31 years old and I just started learning English.
Thanks.
Every morning, I wake up at 4:30. I have breakfast. i eat bread, jam and butter. i drink coffee. After, I take a shower and I get dressed. Then I brush my teeth. I go to work at 5:30. I walk for 30 minutes. I am a teacher, I teach french in a language center in Colombia.
I finish work at 12:00. I walk back home and I have lunch. In the afternoon, i prepare my classes for the next day. To rest a little , I listen to music, I watch videos on Youtube (ou Youtube videos?) and i lay on my bed.
Sometimes, I go to the gym. I Have dinner; I take a shower and I read some things about languages and news.
I go to bed at 10:00
Tons of thanks !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2019 21:16
Réponse : Aide/Correction de gerondif, postée le 20-10-2019 à 23:55:07 (S | E)
Hello.
You should link your sentences more. Then, After that,...
You mistake to lie, verb of position for to lay, verb of movement.
French with a capital F.
Réponse : Aide/Correction de lucile83, postée le 21-10-2019 à 09:23:00 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Merci de noter que l'on doit toujours écrire 'I' , pas 'i'.
Merci d'y penser la prochaine fois.
Cordialement.
Réponse : Aide/Correction de buca17, postée le 22-10-2019 à 00:46:06 (S | E)
merci à vous deux !
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