Horror films/correction
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Message de hayti posté le 07-06-2019 à 10:25:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous s’il vous plaît m'aider à corriger mes erreurs,
d'avance pour votre aide.
Dear Danny, I was so happy to receive your email about reasons for which you like science fiction films. In this email, I will respond your question about kind of films I like most and why. Well, I'm one of horror films'lovers and this is for the following reasons.To begin with, when I watch horror films I feel that the events are too realistic and I can be easy absorbed. Besides, horror films strength our emotions and our personalities to not even cry for nothing. Furthermore, this kind of films is a really good mean to get rid of our fobbies and it is also a efficient tool to feel relaxed in pleasure time or free time in my mind. To sum up, each one has her or his reasons for which he or she likes a special kind of films.
Your friend, Clara.
Merci à ceux qui partagent leur savoir par générosité .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-06-2019 13:32
Message de hayti posté le 07-06-2019 à 10:25:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous s’il vous plaît m'aider à corriger mes erreurs,
d'avance pour votre aide. Dear Danny, I was so happy to receive your email about reasons for which you like science fiction films. In this email, I will respond your question about kind of films I like most and why. Well, I'm one of horror films'lovers and this is for the following reasons.To begin with, when I watch horror films I feel that the events are too realistic and I can be easy absorbed. Besides, horror films strength our emotions and our personalities to not even cry for nothing. Furthermore, this kind of films is a really good mean to get rid of our fobbies and it is also a efficient tool to feel relaxed in pleasure time or free time in my mind. To sum up, each one has her or his reasons for which he or she likes a special kind of films.
Your friend, Clara.
Merci à ceux qui partagent leur savoir par générosité .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-06-2019 13:32
Réponse : Horror films/correction de here4u, postée le 07-06-2019 à 12:58:55 (S | E)
Hello!
Dear Danny, I was so happy to receive your email about XXX reasons for which you like science fiction films. In this email, I will respond your question about XXX kind of films I like most and why. Well, I'm one/ a of horror films'lovers and this is for the following reasons.(:)To begin with, when I watch horror films I feel that the events are too (very?) realistic and I can be easy (= adjectif ! Il faut un adverbe ici !) absorbed (thrilled?). Besides, horror films strengthEN our emotions and our personalities to not even cry = not to cry ...for nothing. Furthermore, this kind of films is a really good mean to get rid of our fobbies
and it is also a efficient tool to feel relaxed in pleasure time or free time in my mind
(not sure I understand what you mean...). To sum up, each one has her or his reasons for which/ why he or she likes a special kind of films. Your friend, Clara.
Réponse : Horror films/correction de hayti, postée le 07-06-2019 à 18:14:36 (S | E)
Bonjour,
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