Rack your brains and help!/ 46

Rack your brains and help!/ 46
Message de here4u posté le 10-05-2019 à 14:29:17 (S | E | F)
Hello, dear Friends!

Voici votre prochain exercice "remue-méninges" ... Moins d'actualité que le précédent, un peu plus ardu, parce que plus abstrait aussi ... c'est un beau défi qui vous est lancé ... Relevez-le, s'il vous plaît !
C'est toujours un et la correction sera postée le mardi 28 mai, tard sans doute ...
Bon courage à tous ... I give you THE FORCE!

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! ATTENTION ! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (et à écrire en majuscules !) Cependant, cette fois encore, vous en verrez plus, car une fois qu'il fait une faute, mon élève la répète tout le long du texte ! (il l'a faite de bonne foi !) Merci de les corriger, en ne les comptant qu’une seule fois …

Every nights, our mind enter a wild fantasy land. Which is impossible during the woken day can be experimented in vivid detail. The most of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. Though willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experiment whatever they fancy.You become conscious that you’re sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can learn yourself thanks to different techniques. It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as authentical as reality. It can be truly mind blown to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: flow over mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time traveling, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meeting your hero or visiting alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal psychologic issues. In safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tip into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

II) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them so as to make meaningful sentences:

1. LETTERS/ MIND/ DREAMS/ UNCONSCIOUS/ FROM/ LIKE/ THE/ ARE/ = 8

2. CAN/ AND/ A/ BE/ VISUALLY/ FULLY/ PERFECTLY/ DETAILED/ RICH/ LUCID/ TANGIBLE/ DREAM/ = 12

3. A/ A/ ON/ OF/ TO/ HOW/ FRACTION/ ONLY/ REGULAR/ BASIS/ LUCID/ LEARN/ SMALL/ DREAM/ PEOPLE/ = 15

4. If LYON SARMED were NTIWETR in the EAMS EAGAGUNL we use in GIANKW YIARTLE.= 7

5. GIBNE DSHEAC is one of the TOSM NMOOMC MEDAR SOMSLBY in all SUURTELC.

III) PLAYING and WORKING WITH WORDS: Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, (you CANNOT change the nature of the words!) and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE.
You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively! PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THESE WORDS!
Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens.
Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, courte (moins de 50 mots, si possible ...), mais je le répète, qui ait un sens et sa logique interne !) Cet exercice est TRES difficile, , c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne pouvez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
La date limite pour cet exercice est le lundi 27 mai 2019 tard. (Ne pas dépasser 60-65 mots … Merci. )
( Beaucoup de règles, j'en suis désolée ... mais déjà comme ça, c'est énormément de travail, et sans un effort de chacun, c'est ingérable.) Je sais que plusieurs d'entre vous sont très attachés à cet exercice-jeu, qu'ils trouvent formateur and "mind-puzzling". Je vous rappelle cependant que vous n'êtes pas obligés de le faire ! FREEDOM!
Voici les éléments imposés cette fois :

- (to) OFFER - (to) FASCINATE – a SURVIVAL – an AGGRESSION – SHABBY – SNEAKY – ELSEWHERE – DURING – + un conseil ;
Give me your best, as ever, I give you THE FORCE!

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de quaine, postée le 13-05-2019 à 11:49:26 (S | E)
Hello,
I)
Every NIGHT, our mind ENTERS a wild fantasy land. WHAT is impossible during the AWAKEN day can be experimented in vivid DETAILS. MOST of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. THROUGH willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experiment whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the OCEAN (en minuscules) or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can learn BY yourself thanks to different techniques. It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC as reality. It can be truly MINDBLOWING to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLY over mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time TRAVELLING, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, MEET your hero or VISIT alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal PSYCHOLOGICAL issues. In THE safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also DIP into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised BY where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

II)
1. LETTERS/ MIND/ DREAMS/ UNCONSCIOUS/ FROM/ LIKE/ THE/ ARE/ = 8
DREAMS ARE LIKE LETTERS FROM THE UNCONSCIOUS MIND..

2. CAN/ AND/ A/ BE/ VISUALLY/ FULLY/ PERFECTLY/ DETAILED/ RICH/ LUCID/ TANGIBLE/ DREAM/ = 12
A LUCID DREAM CAN BE FULLY VISUALLY DETAILED, RICH AND PERFECTLY TANGIBLE

3. A/ A/ ON/ OF/ TO/ HOW/ FRACTION/ ONLY/ REGULAR/ BASIS/ LUCID/ LEARN/ SMALL/ DREAM/ PEOPLE/ = 15
ONLY A SMALL FRACTION OF PEOPLE LEARN HOW TO LUCID DREAM ON A REGULAR BASIS.

4. If LYON SARMED were NTIWETR in the EAMS EAGAGUNL we use in GIANKW YIARTLE.= 7
If ONLY DREAMS were NTIWETR in the SAME LANGUAGE we use in WAKING REALITY

5. GIBNE DSHEAC is one of the TOSM NMOOMC MEDAR SOMSLBY in all SUURTELC.
BINGE CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all SUURTELC.

III)
DURING your dream of the SURVIVAL camp, if you are OFFERED by a SNEAKY individual to commit an AGGRESSION against a SHABBY old man, you may feel FASCINATED but flee ELSEWHERE!

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 13-05-2019 à 12:43:04 (S | E)
Hello!

on this thread, quaine!

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de magie8, postée le 14-05-2019 à 17:10:07 (S | E)
bonjour ,je n'avance pas , car j'ai beaucoup beaucoup de travail , je ne sais pas si je pourrais faire plus.
READY TO CORRECT

Every NIGHT, our mind enterS IN a wild fantasy WORLD. Which is impossible THE day ON AWAKENING(le jour au réveil)or AWAKENED DURING THE DAY ( éveillé pendant le jour) can be experiENCIED in vivid detail. MOST (sans the) of us are unaware that THEY are dreaming,WHAT meanS that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. ALThough willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experiment whatever they fancy.You become conscious that you’re sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the ocean(majuscule quand il est nommé) or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can learn BY yourself thanks to different techniques.
It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC as reality. It can be truly MIND-BLOWING (effarant, hallucinant)to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLY over mountains, have SEXUAL dreams,go base jumping, time traveLLING ( un seul L in US)dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meeting your HEROES or visiting THE alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal PSHYCHOLOGICAL issues. In THE safety of the lucid dream environment(dans la sécurité de l'environnement du rêve lucide) you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tip into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised BY whAT your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de nate, postée le 15-05-2019 à 14:01:16 (S | E)
Hello,

READY FOR CORRECTION

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you!

Every NIGHT (1), our mind ENTERS (2) a wild fantasy land. WHAT (3) is impossible during the WAKING (4) day can be EXPERIENCED (5) in vivid detail. () (6) Most of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers BECOMES (7 I nearly didn't see it) conscious that they’re asleep. THROUGH (8) willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to EXPERIENCE (9) whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the ocean (10) or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you HAVE YET TO (11) lucid dream, you can learn BY (12) yourself thanks to different techniques. It allows you to explore your DREAM (13) world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC (14) as reality. It can be truly mind-BLOWING (15) to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLYING (16) over mountains, HAVING (17) SEX DREAMS (18), GOING (19) base jumping, time traveling, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meeting your hero or visiting alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal PSYCHOLOGICAL (20) issues. In safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also TAP (21) into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised AT (22) where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

III) PLAYING and WORKING WITH WORDS:

''Stop being SHABBY and be a little FASCINATED by your uncle telling his SURVIVAL — plus numerous AGGRESSIONS waged by SNEAKY narcotraffickers — DURING Mexican Drug War; otherwise YOU’D BETTER sleep ELSEWHERE, then OFFER a prayer for me not to belt you.
43 words

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de alpiem, postée le 17-05-2019 à 21:36:06 (S | E)

Hello,every friend

my Rack your brains and help!/ 46 is FINISHED

Every NIGHT,our mind ENTERS a wild fantasy land. WHAT is impossible during AWOKEN day can be
experimented in vivid detail.The most of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that
we can't direct the course of our dreams.
But a FEW number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they're asleep. THROUGH willpower
they can alter the course of their dreams to experiment whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you're sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. A FEW athletes use lucid dreaming AS an opportunity for PRACTICING real-life skills,as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don't already lucid-dream, you can learn yourself thanks to different techniques. It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you see,hear, touch, taste and smell will be as authentical as reality. It can be truly mind-BLOWING to discover this virtual world.
Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLYING over mountains, havING dream-sex ,goING base-jumping, time-travelling, dinosaur spotting, ninja-fighting, meeting your hero or visiting alien planets.
Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal psychologic issues.In THE safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias,anxieties, nightmares and past traumas.You can also DIP into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous FOLKS. Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid-dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You'll be limited only by your imagination.

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de icare29, postée le 21-05-2019 à 23:40:20 (S | E)
Hello Here4u and alL hard workers , here is my work , OK FOR CORRECTION .

Every NIGHT, our mind ENTERS a wild fantasy land. WHAT is impossible during the woken day can be EXPERIENCED in vivid detail . MOST of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can't direct the course of our dreams.

But a small number of lucid dreamers BECOMES conscious that they're asleep. THROUGH willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to EXPERIENCE whatever they fancy.You become conscious that you're sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the ocean or take a rocket TOWARDS deep space.

Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as they can improve mental preparation for important events. If you HAVEN'T already HAD lucid dream, you can learn IT BY yourself thanks to different techniques.

It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you CAN see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC as reality. It can be truly MIND- BLOWING to discover this virtual world.

Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLY over mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time TRAVELLING, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, MEET your hero or VISIT alien planets.

Lucid DREAM also allows you to overcome personal PSYCHOLOGICAL issues. In safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also TAP into your inner creativity.

In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.

Experts agree that everyone has the potential FOR lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You'll be limited only by your imagination.

111 pLAYING WITH WORDS
to) OFFER - (to) FASCINATE ? a SURVIVAL ? an AGGRESSION ? SHABBY ? SNEAKY ? ELSEWHERE ? DURING ? un conseil ;

Don't be so FASCINATED by this city , your chance of SURVIVAL in this SHABBY downtown are small , DURING your trip you will risk an AGGRESSION on every street corner by SNEAKY gangsters ,that's why I ADVISE you to go ELSEWHERE, and I can OFFER you my help and guide you in safe place .

Dear Here4u thanks a lot for your new good exercise

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de joe39, postée le 22-05-2019 à 18:36:42 (S | E)
I submit you hereunder my try,
partly dedicated to a piece of local history,
ready to be checked

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! ATTENTION ! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (et à écrire en majuscules !) Cependant, cette fois encore, vous en verrez plus, car une fois qu'il fait une faute, mon élève la répète tout le long du texte ! (il l'a faite de bonne foi !) Merci de les corriger, en ne les comptant qu’une seule fois …

Every NIGHT - 1, our MINDS -2enter a wild fantasy land. WHAT - 3 is impossible during the WAKING HOURS - 4 can be experimented in vivid detail. Most of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. TROUGH - 5 willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to EXPERIENCE - 6 whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re ASLEEP- 7. You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to PRACTISE - 8 real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can TEACH YOOURSELF -9 thanks to different techniques. IT ENABLES - 10 you to explore your DREAMING- 11 world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC -12 as reality. It can be truly MIND BLOWING -13 to discover this virtual world.
Moreover, you can FULFIL - 15 any fantasy: FLY - 16 over mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time traveling dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, MEET - 17 your hero or VISIT alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal PSYCHOLOGICAL-18 issues
. In THE SAFETY - 19 of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also TAP - 20 into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential lucid dream. With a little PRACTICE and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

II) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them so as to make meaningful sentences:
1. LETTERS/ MIND/ DREAMS/ UNCONSCIOUS/ FROM/ LIKE/ THE/ ARE/ = 8
Dreams are like letters from the unconscious mind. - 8
2. CAN/ AND/ A/ BE/ VISUALLY/ FULLY/ PERFECTLY/ DETAILED/ RICH/ LUCID/ TANGIBLE/ DREAM/ = 12
A lucid dream can visually be rich, fully tangible and perfectly detailed -12

3. A/ A/ ON/ OF/ TO/ HOW/ FRACTION/ ONLY/ REGULAR/ BASIS/ LUCID/ LEARN/ SMALL/ DREAM/ PEOPLE/ = 15
Only a small fraction of people learn how to lucid dream on a regular basis.

4. If ONLY DREAMS were WRITTEN in the SAME LANGUAGE we use in WAKING REALITY .= 7
5 BEING CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all CULTURES .

III) PLAYING and WORKING WITH WORDS: Using THE 8 WORDS given below La date limite pour cet exercice est le lundi 27 mai 2019 tard. (Ne pas dépasser 60-65 mots … Merci. )
- (to) OFFER - (to) FASCINATE – a SURVIVAL – an AGGRESSION – SHABBY – SNEAKY ELSEWHERE – DURING – + un conseil ;

It's A SURVIVAL of medieval time,
And FASCINATE the tourists nowadays;
SHABBY at first sight:
It was built mainly to control,
the riotous walled town,
It was strangely never an object of AGGRESSION,
It was OFFERED no SNEAKY bribe,
To change side,
As often happened ELSEWHERE,
DURING those times,
Even though many wars,
had involved the little town;
I ADVISE YOU TO VISIT IT,
If you pass, by chance, nearby. 64

Reference: the Castle of Muggia (province of Trieste), built in 1375 by order of Marquard of Randeck, Patriarch of Aquileia. As its purpose was to check Marquard’s fidgety subjects, once the Serenissima Republic of Venice acquired the town, the position on which the castle had been built, wasn’t proper to oppose attacks from outside the town, the fortalice lost its military importance, despite the lot of wars in which the town was after then involved. It became, therefore, only barracks for the town's garrison.

I thank you very much for the nice exercise and remain,
wishing you a pleasant evening.
So long.
Joe39

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Modifié par joe39 le 31-05-2019 18:31

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de magie8, postée le 25-05-2019 à 06:01:34 (S | E)
Bonjour à tous, je n'aurais peut être pas le temps de revenir sur la post- traduction du texte.Je pense que ce serait bien que les volontaires se fassent connaître en amont en disant ce qu'ils pourront faire.Ainsi , nous saurons à l'avance qui va faire quoi et chacun pourra se préparer en nous arrangeant pour que cela tourne. C'est une suggestion , pas une obligation , bien sûr en cas de difficultés , je peux toujours aider. Pour l'instant je dois m'occuper à faire rentrer l'argent pour payer les factures , très important aussi.A bientôt

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 25-05-2019 à 11:10:05 (S | E)
Hello!

Belle initiative, magie ! J'aime quand tout est "planifié" et roule sans heurts !

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de maxwell, postée le 25-05-2019 à 18:48:22 (S | E)
Hello!
OK Magie8
Je serai volontaire Puisque tu suggères d'annoncer à l'avance notre choix, je prendrai les 5 phrases.

Thanks a lot Here4U! Again, that was not so easy as I'm often hesitating between plural or singular after a possessive... You know perfectly well where French learners tear their hair out, don't you?

I Help my student:
Every NIGHT, our MINDS enter a wild fantasy land. Which is impossible during the WORKING day can be experimented in vivid DETAILS. MOST of us REMAIN UNCONSCIOUS WHILE we are dreaming, meaning that we can't direct the course of our dreams. But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they're asleep. THROUGH willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experiment whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you're sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to PRACTISE real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you HAVEN'T already lucid DREAMT, you can TEACH yourself thanks to different techniques. It allows you to explore your dreaming world with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as AUTHENTIC as reality. It can be truly mind BLOWING to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfill any fantasy: FLYING over mountains, HAVING SEX dream, GOING base jumping, time TRAVELLING, dinosaur SIGHTING, ninja fighting, meeting your HEROES or visiting alien planets. Lucid dreaming also allows you to overcome personal PSYCHOLOGICAL issues. SAFE IN YOUR lucid dream ENVIRONMENTS, you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also DIP into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous FOLKS. Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your MINDS TAKE you. You'll be limited only by your IMAGINATIONS.

II) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them:
1. DREAMS ARE LIKE LETTERS FROM THE UNCONSCIOUS MIND.
4. If ONLY DREAMS were WRITTEN in the SAME LANGUAGE we use in WAKING REALITY.
5. BEING CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all CULTURES.

III) Playing with words:
If this area FASCINATES you, you'D BETTER learn SURVIVAL skills beforehand because DURING your stay, you might be faced with SNEAKY sudden AGGRESSIONS, be taken as a prisoner in SHABBY places, and end up wishing you had been OFFERED a trip ELSEWHERE. (43)

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de chocolatcitron, postée le 25-05-2019 à 20:44:19 (S | E)
Rack your brains and help!/ 46 FINISHED.

Volontairement, je laisse ma place pour la correction, se livrer à ce genre d'exercice est très formateur, et ce sont toujours les mêmes qui participent : lancez-vous, il n'y a que le premier pas qui compte !

Deliberately, I step aside for anybody else for the following work, engaging in this kind of exercise is very educative, and the same members always contribute to these following works : now, you have a go, make the first move would be great !


Message de here4u posté le 10-05-2019 à 14:29:17 le mercredi 28 mai
Hello,my dear Here4u ! Merci pour ce très beau défi que j’espère avoir relevé à la hauteur de nos espérances ! (Les tiennes et les miennes… ) 😉
Hi Everybody ! 😊
Bon courage à tous ... I give you THE FORCE!

Here is my work:
I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! ATTENTION ! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger !
Every (1) NIGHT, our (2)MINDS enter a wild fantasy land. Which is impossible during the (3) AWAKENING day can be (4) EXPERIENCED in vivid (5) DETAILS. (6) MOST of us are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. (7) THROUGH willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to (4 bis) EXPERIENCE whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re sleeping. You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid (8)DREAMS as an opportunity to practice real-life skills, as it can improve (9) THEIR mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can learn (10) TO DO BY yourself (11) TO EMBRACE different techniques. It allows you to explore your (12) DREAMWORLD with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as (13) AUTHENTIC as reality. It can be truly (14) MIND-BLOWING to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can (15) FULFIL any fantasy: flow over mountains, have dream sex, go (16) BASE-JUMP, (17) TRAVEL THROUGHT TIME, dinosaur (18) SPOTLIGHT, (19)NINJA’S fighting, meeting your hero or visiting alien planets. Lucid (8 bis) DREAMS also allows you to overcome personal psychologic issues. In safety of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tip into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a (20) BIT OF practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.


II) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them so as to make meaningful sentences:
1.DREAMS ARE LIKE LETTERS FROM THE UNCONSCIOUS MIND.= 8
2. A FULLY LUCID DREAM CAN BE PERFECTLY TANGIBLE RICH AND VISUALLY DETAILED. = 12
3.ONLY A SMALL FRACTION OF PEOPLE LEARN HOW TO LUCID DREAM ON A REGULAR BASIS. = 15
4. If ONLY DREAMS were WRITTEN in the SAME LANGUAGE we use in WAKING REALITY.= 7
5. BEING CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all CULTURES.


III) PLAYING and WORKING WITH WORDS: Using THE 8 WORDS given below 2 verbs, 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. (moins de 50 mots, sans dépasser 60 -65 mots).La date limite ici est le lundi 27 mai 2019 tard.
Voici les éléments imposés cette fois :
- (to) OFFER - (to) FASCINATE – a SURVIVAL – an AGGRESSION – SHABBY – SNEAKY – ELSEWHERE – DURING – + un conseil ;

All what he said FASCINATED me, I even OFFERED him my help anytime, but DURING the day, I was brutally laid about, and while I faced the AGGRESSION that SHABBY and SNEAKY supposedly friend didn’t help me for my SURVIVAL, I told him he SHOULD go anywhere, but ELSEWHERE! 50 words.

Tout ce qu’il disait me fascinait, je lui ai même offert mon aide à tout instant, mais dans la journée, j’ai été sauvagement attaquée, et tandis que je faisais face à mon agression, ce soi-disant ami minable et fourbe ne m’a pas aidée pour ma survie, je lui ai dit qu’il devrait aller n’importe où, mais ailleurs !

Give me your best, as ever, I give you THE FORCE!
I give the force to you my dear Here4u, thanks for this great topic !
Have a very sweet week !!! We don’t use all our minds as we should !
See you soon.

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 28-05-2019 à 23:29:43 (S | E)
Hello, Dear Friends!

Voici votre corrigé, mais vous savez que votre travail n’est pas fini (même les membres qui n’ont pas pu « rendre » le devoir peuvent se proposer en volontaires pour le follow-up work.) Il est, bien sûr, plus facile pour ceux qui ont déjà travaillé sur ce texte de se porter volontaires. Nous avons encore besoin de DEUX VOLONTAIRES pour le texte, vu que Maxwell s’est déclaré pour les phrases. Merci Maxwell ! et merci aux deux volontaires supplémentaires.
Le phénomène décrit dans ce texte est un peu mystérieux et n’est pas forcément facile à comprendre …

1. Please, help my student! He really needs you!

Every night (1), our minds (2) enter a wild fantasy land. What (3) is impossible during the waking (4) day can be experienced (5) in vivid detail. Most of us (6) are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. Through (7) willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experience (5) whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re asleep.(8) You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practise (9) real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can teach (10) yourself thanks to different techniques. It enables (11) you to explore your dreamworld (12) with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as authentic (13) as reality. // End of part 1// It can be truly mind-blowing (14) to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfil(l (15 ) any fantasy: fly over (16) mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time traveling, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meet (16) your hero or visit (17) alien planets. Lucid dreaming also enables (11) you to overcome personal psychological (18) issues. In the safety (19) of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tap (20) into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

ATTENTION ! a LUCID DREAM= le nom ; TO LUCID DREAM= le verbe ; => lucid dreaming.
(1) Every + singulier=> every night ;
(2) our minds : our = première personne plurielle => nom au pluriel, donc pas de –S au verbe.
(3) Ce qui/ ce que : lorsqu’il annonce ce qui va être dit = WHAT (en début de phrase ou de proposition). ,WHICH= ce qui/ ce que lorsque l’expression reprend ce qui a été dit.
(4) the waking day : wake, I woke, woken= se réveiller ; = the length of time when people are not asleep in 24 hours.
(5) Différence entre « experience » et « experiment ». N° Lien internet

(6) Différencier « Most/ most of » et « the most » : Lien internet

(7) Différencier THROUGH // THOUGH// TOUGH// THROUGHOUT (Un volontaire pour donner les traductions ?)
(8) asleep ? sleeping ? Lien internet

(9) practiCe = noun ; as for the verb : BE= practise // practice US
(10) Teach yourself (privilégiez toujours dans ce type d’exercice, la solution qui consiste à corriger le MOT sans rien rajouter !) ; vous avez souvent corrigé en « learn BY yourself ».
(11) Différence entre « ENABLE »(insiste sur la capacité – physique ou intellectuelle ) et « ALLOW » (insiste sur la permission, l’autorisation). Lien internet

(12) a dreamworld= monde du rêve, le monde imaginaire.
(13) authentic= genuine
(14) mind-blowing= sens actif => terminaison en ing. (ex hard working= who works hard !) à ne pas confondre avec wind-swept (nom+ participe passé – 3è colonne ou BV+ed)= sens passif = action subie.
(15) Fulfil= un seul L à l’infinitif en GB // mais 2 en US ! (ne mélangez pas les deux « logiques »…)
(16) Pour ceux qui ne savent pas leurs verbes irréguliers … ne pas confondre FLY, FLEW, FLOWN = voler et FLOW (régulier !)
(17) meet : sur le même plan que « you can fulfil/ fly/ have/ go/ meet… »
(18) psychologicAL issues
(19) THE safety of … ici, le mot « safety »= sécurité, n’est pas « abstrait », mais déterminé par « of »…
(20) To tap into something= find a way of using = puiser dans ses ressources.

II) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them so as to make meaningful sentences:

1. Dreams are like letters from the unconscious mind.= 8

2. A fully lucid dream can be perfectly tangible, rich and visually detailed. = 12

3. Only a small fraction of people learn how to lucid dream on a regular basis. .= 15

4. If only dreams were written in the same language we use in waking reality.


III) PLAYING and WORKING WITH WORDS:

- DURING your dream of the SURVIVAL camp, if you are OFFERED to commit an AGGRESSION against a SHABBY old man by a SNEAKY individual , you may feel FASCINATED but flee ELSEWHERE!

- Stop being SHABBY and be a little FASCINATED by your uncle telling his SURVIVAL — plus numerous AGGRESSIONS waged by SNEAKY narcotraffickers — DURING the Mexican Drug War; otherwise YOU’D BETTER sleep ELSEWHERE, then OFFER a prayer for me not to belt you. (42)

- If this area FASCINATES you, you'D BETTER learn SURVIVAL skills beforehand because DURING your stay, you might face SNEAKY sudden AGGRESSIONS, be taken AS A prisoner in SHABBY places, and end up wishing you had been OFFERED a trip ELSEWHERE. (41)

- Don't be so FASCINATED by this city, your chance of SURVIVAL in this SHABBY city center are small ; DURING your trip, on every street corner, you will risk an AGGRESSION by SNEAKY gangsters ;that's why I ADVISE you to go ELSEWHERE, and I can OFFER you my help and guide you to a safe place.

- It's a SURVIVAL of Medieval Times
which FASCINATES the tourists nowadays;
SHABBY at first sight:
it was built mainly to control
the riotous walled town;
Strangely, it was never the object of AN AGGRESSION;
it was OFFERED no SNEAKY bribe,
to change side
as often happened ELSEWHERE
DURING those times;
even though many wars,
had involved the little town;
I ADVISE YOU TO VISIT IT,
If, by chance, you pass nearby. 64

- All that he said FASCINATED me; I even OFFERED him my help anytime, but DURING the day, I was brutally mugged, and while I faced the AGGRESSION, that SHABBY and SNEAKY supposedly friend didn’t help me for my SURVIVAL, I told him he SHOULD go anywhere, but ELSEWHERE! 50 words.

Merci à tous, et BRAVO! (J'attends que les volontaires se déclarent ... [avec impatience ! ])

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de maxwell, postée le 30-05-2019 à 07:46:58 (S | E)
FINISHED
Hello Vive les jours fériés !

1. Dreams are like letters from the unconscious mind.
Les rêves sont comme des lettres provenant de l'inconscient.

2. A fully lucid dream can be perfectly tangible, rich and visually detailed.
Un rêve entièrement lucide peut être parfaitement tangible, riche et détaillé visuellement.

3. Only a small fraction of people learn how to lucid dream on a regular basis.
Seule une petite fraction de personnes apprennent à faire des rêves lucides régulièrement.

4. If only dreams were written in the same language we use in waking reality.
Si seulement les rêves étaient écrits dans le même langage que celui que nous utilisons dans la réalité éveillée.

5. BEING CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all CULTURES.
Etre pourchassé est l'un des symboles du rêve les plus courants dans toutes les cultures.

J'en profite, j'ai une question qui intéressera tout le monde certainement... Pourquoi ne fallait-il pas corriger : "Have dream sex" en "Have sex dream" ? On parle bien des rêves érotiques et non pas d'acte sexuel de rêve?
Et (vraiment, j'abuse ) pourquoi ne faut-il pas un pluriel à these famous FOLKS ?

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 30-05-2019 à 12:15:42 (S | E)
Hello!

Bon ! J'attends toujours les volontaires pour le follow-up work ... tout en sachant que demander ceci au "début" d'un "viaduc" est un peu irréaliste ... Paris est vide (de ses habitants en tout cas ...) et on nous a promis l'été pour ce week-end. Il tarde quand même à montrer le bout de son rayon ...

Maintenant, si les volontaires me posent tous des questions du genre de celles posées par Max, euh ... Bon, je vais dire, qu'à la lecture, pour moi, " having a sex dream" n'est pas vraiment comparable à "having dream sex", (quoique !) mais je vais attendre la traduction proposée pour être, si nécessaire, plus explicite.
Quant à "folk", ça, c'est facile ! Lien internet


Allez, au travail ! J'attends ! Je sais que certain(e)s sont prêt(e)s à "step in if necessary", mais ce serait tellement mieux si les volontaires "tournaient" ...

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 30-05-2019 à 12:21:20 (S | E)
Hello, maxwell! Merci de ton empressement !

Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de maxwell, postée le 30-05-2019 à 07:46:58 (S | E)
FINISHED
Hello Vive les jours fériés ! (les quoi ?)

1. Dreams are like letters from the unconscious mind.
Les rêves sont comme des lettres provenant de l'inconscient. TTB (Juste pour être moins littérale, je dirais "ressemblent à..."

2. A fully lucid dream can be perfectly tangible, rich and visually detailed.
Un rêve entièrement lucide peut être parfaitement tangible, riche et détaillé visuellement.

3. Only a small fraction of people learn how to lucid dream on a regular basis.
Seule une petite fraction de personnes apprennent à faire des rêves lucides régulièrement.

4. If only dreams were written in the same language we use in waking reality.
Si seulement les rêves étaient écrits dans le même langage que celui que nous utilisons dans la réalité éveillée.

5. BEING CHASED is one of the MOST COMMON DREAM SYMBOLS in all CULTURES.
Etre pourchassé est l'un des symboles du rêve les plus courants dans toutes les cultures. (ou "rêves symboliques ...")

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de peticha, postée le 30-05-2019 à 23:11:03 (S | E)
Hello here4u, and each of you!

Finished.

je me propose pour la première partie du texte.

Every night (1), our minds (2) enter a wild fantasy land. What (3) is impossible during the waking (4) day can be experienced (5) in vivid detail. Most of us (6) are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. Through (7) willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experience (5) whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re asleep.(8) You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practise (9) real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can teach (10) yourself thanks to different techniques. It enables (11) you to explore your dreamworld (12) with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as authentic (13) as reality. // End of part 1//


Here is my try:
Chaque nuit, nos esprits s'invitent dans un monde onirique sauvage. Ce qui est impossible durant l'éveil diurne, peut être expérimenté avec des détails précis. La plupart d'entre nous est inconscient pendant le rêve, cela signifie que nous ne pouvons pas diriger le déroulement de nos rêves.
Mais un petit nombre de rêveurs lucides deviennent conscients qu'ils sont endormis. Par la volonté, ils peuvent modifier le cours de leurs rêves pour expérimenter ce qu'ils ont envie de faire.
Vous devenez conscient que vous êtes endormis. Vous pouvez nager vers les profondeurs de l'océan, ou embarquer dans une fusée pour un voyage dans l'espace infini. Quelques athlètes font usage du rêve lucide pour augmenter les compétences de la vie réelle, comme ça peut aussi améliorer les préparations mentales pour les événements importants. Si vous n'avez pas déjà fait des rêves lucides, vous pouvez vous auto-suggérer grâce aux différentes techniques. Cela vous permet d'explorer votre monde onirique, en toute clarté. Tout ce que vous voyez, entendez, touchez, goûtez et sentez sera aussi vrai que dans la réalité.

Thanks here4u , have a great week!
So long.

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 30-05-2019 à 23:23:52 (S | E)
peticha, et

Je viens de poster l'exercice suivant, et il me reste à mettre le corrigé en ligne avant minuit ! Je regarde ta traduction demain ... en espérant qu'un 3è volontaire gagnera toute ma reconnaissance !

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de magie8, postée le 31-05-2019 à 15:23:30 (S | E)
bonjour , comme les volontaires ne se bousculent pas, je vais traduire la suite à bientôt magie8

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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de magie8, postée le 31-05-2019 à 16:13:42 (S | E)
/ It can be truly mind-blowing (14) to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfil(l (15 ) any fantasy: fly over (16) mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time traveling, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meet (16) your hero or visit (17) alien planets. Lucid dreaming also enables (11) you to overcome personal psychological (18) issues. In the safety (19) of the lucid dream environment you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tap (20) into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

Il peut être vraiment hallucinant de découvrir ce monde virtuel.De plus, vous pouvez réaliser n importe quelle fantaisie:Survoler les montagnes,mettre du sexe dans votre rêve , faire du saut de base, voyager dans le temps, observer les dinosaurs,combattre les ninjas, rencontrer vos héros,ou visiter les planètes extra- terrestres.Le rêve lucide vous permet aussi de surmonter vos problèmes phsychologiques personnels.Dans la sécurité de l environnement du rêve lucide vous pouvez affronter vos peurs,phobies,anxiétés,cauchemars et traumatismes passés.Vous pouvez également faire appel à votre créativité interne.De manière surréaliste et inattendue,vous pouvez composer de la musique,rechercher des images artistiques originales et résoudre des problèmes techniques tout comme ces gens célèbres.Les experts s accordent à dire que tout le monde a le potentiel d un rêve lucide .Avec un peu de pratique et de persévérance vous pourriez être surpris par ce que votre esprit vous apporte.Vous ne serez limités que par votre imagination.

au départ j avais compris dream sex : rêver de sexe ou rêve sexuel mais comme l adjectif n est pas inversé j ai essayé de trouver un autre sens ??
Il manque les apostrophes la touche du clavier ne répond plus....
Bon week end à tous 30 degrès aujourdh ui sur ma terrasse


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Réponse : Rack your brains and help!/ 46 de here4u, postée le 01-06-2019 à 15:34:57 (S | E)
Hello!

Un grand à Peticha et Magie pour la traduction de ce texte ! Ce n'était pas facile du tout ...

Every night (1), our minds (2) enter a wild fantasy land. What (3) is impossible during the waking (4) day can be experienced (5) in vivid detail. Most of us (6) are unaware that we are dreaming, meaning that we can’t direct the course of our dreams.
But a small number of lucid dreamers become conscious that they’re asleep. Through (7) willpower, they can alter the course of their dreams to experience (5) whatever they fancy. You become conscious that you’re asleep.(8) You can swim to the bottom of the Ocean or take a rocket into deep space. Some athletes use lucid dreaming as an opportunity to practise (9) real-life skills, as it can improve mental preparation for important events. If you don’t already lucid dream, you can teach (10) yourself thanks to different techniques. It enables (11) you to explore your dreamworld (12) with total clarity. Everything you see, hear, touch, taste and smell will be as authentic (13) as reality. // End of part 1//


Chaque nuit, notre esprit s'invite (= au singulier en français !) dans un monde onirique sauvage (débridé). Ce qui est impossible durant l'éveil diurne, peut être ressenti (expérimenté correspondrait mieux à "experimented") avec des détails précis (Oui ! "beaucoup de réalisme".) La plupart d'entre nous est inconscient pendant le rêve (= n'a pas conscience d'être en train de rêver), cela signifie que nous ne pouvons pas diriger le déroulement de nos rêves.
Mais un petit nombre de rêveurs lucides deviennent conscients qu'ils sont endormis. Par la volonté, ils peuvent modifier le cours de leurs rêves pour expérimenter ce qu'ils ont envie de faire.
Vous devenez conscients que vous êtes endormis. Vous pouvez nager vers les profondeurs de l'océan, ou embarquer dans une fusée pour un voyage dans l'espace infini. Quelques athlètes font usage du rêve lucide pour augmenter (s'entraîner et améliorer ...)les compétences de la vie réelle, ceci peut aussi améliorer la préparation mentale à des événements (sportifs) importants. Si vous n'avez pas déjà fait des rêves lucides, vous pouvez vous auto-suggérer (y former vous-mêmes) grâce à différentes techniques. Cela vous permet d'explorer votre monde onirique, en toute clarté. Tout ce que vous voyez, entendez, touchez, goûtez et sentez sera aussi vrai que dans la réalité. Bravo, Peticha ! un grand merci !

It can be truly mind-blowing (14) to discover this virtual world. Moreover, you can fulfil(l (15 ) any fantasy: fly over (16) mountains, have dream sex, go base jumping, time traveling, dinosaur spotting, ninja fighting, meet (16) your hero or visit (17) alien planets. Lucid dreaming also enables (11) you to overcome personal psychological (18) issues. In the safety (19) of the lucid dream environment, you can face your fears, phobias, anxieties, nightmares and past traumas. You can also tap (20) into your inner creativity. In surreal and unexpected ways, you can compose music, seek original artistic imagery and solve technical problems, just like these famous folk.
Experts agree that everyone has the potential to lucid dream. With a little practice and perseverance you may be surprised where your mind takes you. You’ll be limited only by your imagination.

Il peut être vraiment hallucinant de découvrir ce monde virtuel.De plus, vous pouvez réaliser n'importe quelle fantaisie : survoler les montagnes, pratiquer le sexe * dans votre rêve, faire du saut de base (= sauter d'un immeuble en parachute), voyager dans le temps, observer les dinosaures, combattre les ninjas, rencontrer vos héros, ou visiter les planètes extra-terrestres. Le rêve lucide vous permet aussi de surmonter vos problèmes psychologiques personnels. Dans la sécurité de l'environnement du rêve lucide, vous pouvez affronter vos peurs, vos phobies,vos anxiétés, vos cauchemars et traumatismes passés. Vous pouvez également faire appel à votre créativité intérieure. De manière surréaliste et inattendue, vous pouvez composer de la musique, rechercher des images artistiques originales et résoudre des problèmes techniques, tout comme les gens célèbres l'ont fait.
Les experts s'accordent à dire que tout le monde a le potentiel pour faire des rêves lucides. Avec un peu de pratique et de persévérance vous pourriez être surpris par l'endroit où votre esprit vous emmène. Vous ne serez limités que par votre imagination !

* Beaucoup de liens sur le sujet ... que je ne mettrai pas ... Quand je pense que j'avais imaginé supprimer les trois mots et que je ne les ai laissés que pour ne pas (trop) censurer !

Bravo à vous tous et encore plus à nos trois volontaires au service de tout le groupe !

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