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Message de hugobrenet posté le 03-04-2019 à 20:08:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aurais besoin d'un petit coup de pouce au sujet de ma rédaction pour l'oral blanc, je traite la notion Mythes et heros sur Muhammad Ali. (on l'a vu en cours)

Définition de la notion
Hello, i'am going to talk about the notion myths and heroes,
Firt a fall i would like to give a definition of this notion : A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievement, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.

Introduction
I am going to speak of Muhammad Ali, the famous boxer. He is exemple to athlete often represented as a hero.
Why do we consider M.A like a hero ?

Firstly, M.A was born under the name of Cassius Clay, January 17, 1947 in Louisville, Kentucky. He changed his name to M.A at the age of 22 years after joining the nation of islam in 1964.
M.A is a former American boxer in the heavyweight category and one of the best in the world. M.A became the first triple world champion heavyweight. He has participed in several historic boxingmatches, he won his first professional fight points against Tunney Hunsaker.

Finally,
je bloque pour la conclusion. J'aimerais dire "Les gens considèrent M.A comme un héro car il est un personnage historique de la boxe et qu'il a accompli énormément de combat fantastique, encore aujourd'hui, c'est un symbole de la boxe."

J'avais une petite idée pour le début "the people consider M.A like a hero because he is (historical character ou boxer figure)
Sinon pouvez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes importantes que je devrais corriger ?

Merci pour votre aide.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2019 08:28
Pas de rouge/rose sur les forums, merci.

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Réponse : Aide/oral de laure95, postée le 04-04-2019 à 10:10:58 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Définition de la notion
Hello, i (majuscule)'am going to talk about the notion myths and heroes,
Firt a fall (first of all) i (I)would like to give a definition of this notion

Introduction
He is (article) exemple (orthographe) to athlete often represented as a hero.
Why do we consider M.A like a hero ?

Firstly, M.A was born under the name of Cassius Clay,(préposition) January 17, 1947 in Louisville, Kentucky.
He changed his name to M.A at the age of 22 years (enlever years)after joining the nation of islam in 1964.
M.A is (passé) a former American boxer in the heavyweight category and one of the best in the world.

Finally,
J'aimerais dire "Les gens considèrent M.A comme un héro car il est un personnage historique de la boxe et qu'il a accompli énormément de combat fantastique, encore aujourd'hui, c'est un symbole de la boxe."

J'avais une petite idée pour le début "the (pas de the) people consider M.A like a hero because he is (article)(historical character ou boxer figure)ok, continue.

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Réponse : Aide/oral de hugobrenet, postée le 04-04-2019 à 16:26:57 (S | E)
Hello, I'am going to talk about the notion myths and heroes,
First a fall I would like to give a definition of this notion : A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievement, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.

Introduction
I am going to speak of Muhammad Ali, the famous boxer. He is an example to athlete often represented as a hero.
Why do we consider M.A like a hero ?

Firstly, M.A was born under the name of Cassius Clay,in January 17, 1947 in Louisville, Kentucky. He changed his name to M.A at the age of 22 after joining the nation of islam in 1964.
M.A was a former American boxer in the heavyweight category and one of the best in the world. M.A became the first triple world champion heavyweight. He has participed in several historic boxingmatches, he won his first professional fight points against Tunney Hunsaker.

Pour la conclusion
People consider M.A like a hero because is a boxer figure.

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Réponse : Aide/oral de anne40, postée le 05-04-2019 à 15:31:42 (S | E)
Bonjour Hugo,
First a fall.
=D'abord une chute.

C'est Google traduction ?

Pourquoi "to" athlete ? A quel sens avez-vous pensé en français ?

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Réponse : Aide/oral de anne40, postée le 05-04-2019 à 15:43:55 (S | E)
"I'am" est faux.
"I am" ou en forme contractée "I'm" est juste.

Pas de majuscule après le signe :
...comme en français.

Dernière phrase: "..., because (sujet : "il") is a boxer figure. "

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Réponse : Aide/oral de bluestar, postée le 05-04-2019 à 16:30:25 (S | E)
Bonjour..
Firstly, M.A was born under the name of Cassius Clay, January 17, 1947 1942 in Louisville, Kentucky. He changed his name to M.A at the age of 22 years after joining the nation of islam (majuscule) in 1964.M.A is a former American boxer in the heavyweight category and was one of the best in the world. M.A became the first triple world champion heavyweight. He has participed (temps et orth. a revoir) in several historic boxingmatches, he and won his first professional fight points against Tunney Hunsaker.

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Réponse : Aide/oral de gerold, postée le 05-04-2019 à 18:17:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,

si vous dites firstly, il doit y avoir autre chose ensuite, "secondly" par exemple.

Votre travail est très court, certainement trop court, vous êtes censé parler pendant une dizaine de minutes, je crois ?

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