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Message de dadoush35 posté le 19-11-2018 à 18:53:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce que vous pourriez m'aider à corriger mon texte d'anglais sur un plan de communication s'il vous plait ?
Je vous remercie beaucoup pour votre aide précieuse.
As we said, two of us will directly go to the USA (one in New York and around, the other one in The west coast). The third one will stay in France and be in contact with them. She will analyse the results, the sales, consumer’s comportment… And will give them advices.
French restaurant : at the exit of the restaurants, we will put a display with our range of products so the customers will have the possibility to buy them. Indeed, they will be propose on the French restaurants in some dishes/recipes. For instance, they’ll have a dab of butter with their bread so they’ll test it.
Our products will be propose in baker’s shops and in groceries.
Pauline and me will help the launching of the products. We will go to supermarkets to organize tasting sessions, answer to the customers’ questions. We will also set up an anonymous questionnaire so the clients will be able to give us their opinion : what is good, what they don’t like in the product… In that way, we will see which product we will keep on the American market, and which one is not a good idea to let in this market.
Moreover, when they will give their opinion, they will participe to a drawing lots to win a journey to France to visit our plant and Brittany.
Also they would have the possibility to attend culinary workshops. It is a way for our products to become known.
In a period of 4 month, we would be able to have an idea of the success of each products and remove the one which are not working.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-11-2018 22:48
Message de dadoush35 posté le 19-11-2018 à 18:53:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce que vous pourriez m'aider à corriger mon texte d'anglais sur un plan de communication s'il vous plait ?
Je vous remercie beaucoup pour votre aide précieuse.
As we said, two of us will directly go to the USA (one in New York and around, the other one in The west coast). The third one will stay in France and be in contact with them. She will analyse the results, the sales, consumer’s comportment… And will give them advices.
French restaurant : at the exit of the restaurants, we will put a display with our range of products so the customers will have the possibility to buy them. Indeed, they will be propose on the French restaurants in some dishes/recipes. For instance, they’ll have a dab of butter with their bread so they’ll test it.
Our products will be propose in baker’s shops and in groceries.
Pauline and me will help the launching of the products. We will go to supermarkets to organize tasting sessions, answer to the customers’ questions. We will also set up an anonymous questionnaire so the clients will be able to give us their opinion : what is good, what they don’t like in the product… In that way, we will see which product we will keep on the American market, and which one is not a good idea to let in this market.
Moreover, when they will give their opinion, they will participe to a drawing lots to win a journey to France to visit our plant and Brittany.
Also they would have the possibility to attend culinary workshops. It is a way for our products to become known.
In a period of 4 month, we would be able to have an idea of the success of each products and remove the one which are not working.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-11-2018 22:48
Réponse : Correction/communication de lucile83, postée le 20-11-2018 à 09:20:18 (S | E)
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