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Message de dadoush35 posté le 07-11-2018 à 09:35:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai analysé le logo de Roland Garros, et voudrais savoir si vous détectez des fautes (orthographe, conjugaison...) s'il vous plait :
We chose the Roland Garros logo because for us it seemed interesting to analyse.
First of all, the logo is round like the tennis ball
R & G in the middle of the logo are like Roland Garros. They are made with two colors : one color for each player. There is a clear difference between those two colors, to mean that the players are opponents.
The two white lines are in the middle like the net, with the two letters on each side. We find here again the idea of the two opponents with the separation made with the net.
We can analyse two characters in this logo :
A character with the G (his head on the R, in the G there are one arm and one leg). The character is running.
And also only with the G (the player is doing the service)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide et bonne journée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2018 09:43
Message de dadoush35 posté le 07-11-2018 à 09:35:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai analysé le logo de Roland Garros, et voudrais savoir si vous détectez des fautes (orthographe, conjugaison...) s'il vous plait :
We chose the Roland Garros logo because for us it seemed interesting to analyse.
First of all, the logo is round like the tennis ball
R & G in the middle of the logo are like Roland Garros. They are made with two colors : one color for each player. There is a clear difference between those two colors, to mean that the players are opponents.
The two white lines are in the middle like the net, with the two letters on each side. We find here again the idea of the two opponents with the separation made with the net.
We can analyse two characters in this logo :
A character with the G (his head on the R, in the G there are one arm and one leg). The character is running.
And also only with the G (the player is doing the service)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide et bonne journée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2018 09:43
Réponse : Analyser/ logo de laure95, postée le 07-11-2018 à 11:46:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- We chose the Roland Garros logo: mettre au présent perfect.
- First of all, the logo is round like the (mettre a plutôt que the) tennis ball
- (the letters) R & G in the middle of the logo are like (à la place de like: the letters for)Roland Garros.
- They are made with (pas la bonne préposition)two colors
- The two white lines are in the middle like the net: ordre des mots.
-the separation made with (pas la bonne préposition) the net.
- We can analyse (mettre un autre verbe plus adapté) two characters in this logo :
- in (pas la bonne préposition)the G
- (the player is doing the service):mal dit.
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