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Message de nevra posté le 03-01-2018 à 19:06:50 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je travaille actuellement sur un devoir oral en anglais. J'aimerais avoir votre avis sur mon texte, et si possible votre aide pour corriger mes fautes.
Merci d'avance
I choose to present you an Gustave Courbet’s oil canvas. It’s name is : « The desesperate man » and it measure forty-five centimeter high by fifty-four centimeter wide. To begin, Gustave Courbet is a great french painter on the nineteenth century. I was born on Ornans in eighteen nineteen. He forms part of more famous painters in the romantic movement , then realism movement.
The best known of his works are : « The happy lovers », exposed on "le musée des beaux art" at lyon, and « A burial at Ornans » exposed on the Orsay Museum in Paris.
The desesperate man was painted between eighteen forty-four and eighty forty five, while Gustave Courbet was 26 years old. He loved a lot this canvas and he He took it with him during his exil in Swiss. Today, the canvas belong to a private collection of the art investment advice BNP Paribas.
This canvas represent a close up on Gustave Courbet. He looks desesperate. His eyes are wide open and his hands grab his hair. We watch his muscles are tense and his face are pale…
it seems that he watching us. We ignore the reason of his state.
Gustave Courbet uses a « landscape »format which is unusual for a portrait.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2018 22:52
Message de nevra posté le 03-01-2018 à 19:06:50 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je travaille actuellement sur un devoir oral en anglais. J'aimerais avoir votre avis sur mon texte, et si possible votre aide pour corriger mes fautes.
Merci d'avance
I choose to present you an Gustave Courbet’s oil canvas. It’s name is : « The desesperate man » and it measure forty-five centimeter high by fifty-four centimeter wide. To begin, Gustave Courbet is a great french painter on the nineteenth century. I was born on Ornans in eighteen nineteen. He forms part of more famous painters in the romantic movement , then realism movement.
The best known of his works are : « The happy lovers », exposed on "le musée des beaux art" at lyon, and « A burial at Ornans » exposed on the Orsay Museum in Paris.
The desesperate man was painted between eighteen forty-four and eighty forty five, while Gustave Courbet was 26 years old. He loved a lot this canvas and he He took it with him during his exil in Swiss. Today, the canvas belong to a private collection of the art investment advice BNP Paribas.
This canvas represent a close up on Gustave Courbet. He looks desesperate. His eyes are wide open and his hands grab his hair. We watch his muscles are tense and his face are pale…
it seems that he watching us. We ignore the reason of his state.
Gustave Courbet uses a « landscape »format which is unusual for a portrait.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2018 22:52
Réponse : Correction/G.Courbet de laure95, postée le 04-01-2018 à 11:22:24 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I choose (mettre au present perfect)to present you an (pas d'article) Gustave Courbet’s oil canvas.
- It’s (orthographe) name is : « The desesperate man » and it measure (faute de conjugaison)forty-five centimeter (pluriel)high by fifty-four centimeter (pluriel)wide.
- french (majuscule) painter on (pas la bonne préposition)the nineteenth century.
- I (tu parles de Courbet, pas de toi!)was born on (pas la bonne préposition)Ornans in eighteen nineteen.
- He forms (passé) part of more (mettre au sumerlatif) famous painters in the romantic movement , then (article)realism movement.
- exposed on (pas la bonne préposition) "le musée des beaux art" at (pas la bonne préposition) lyon (majuscule), and « A burial at Ornans » exposed on (pas la bonne préposition)the Orsay Museum in Paris.
- eighty (trait d'union)forty five,
- He loved a lot this (remplacer this par that) canvas and he He
took it with him - Today, the canvas belong (faute de conjugaison) to a private collection of the art investment advice BNP Paribas.
- This canvas represent (faute de conjugaison) a close up on Gustave Courbet.
- his hands grab (mettre au présent be+ing)his hair.
- We Watch (pas le bon mot ici) his muscles are tense and his face are (faute de conjugaison)pale…
- he (il manque l'auxiliaire BE conjugué au présent)watching us.
Réponse : Correction/G.Courbet de lelem352, postée le 04-01-2018 à 17:28:05 (S | E)
Bonjour serait t il possible de corriger mon devoir d anglais au plus rapidement si cela ne vous ennuie pas
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Réponse : Correction/G.Courbet de laure95, postée le 05-01-2018 à 14:02:28 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Désolée mais nous ne corrigeons pas: nous vous indiquons les fautes à corriger et vous donnons des indications pour les corriger!
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