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Message de clement555 posté le 28-12-2017 à 18:13:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je ne suis pas très fort en anglais; est-il possible de faire corriger ce testesvp s'il vous plait?; je peux éventuellement mette une traduction en français.
( pour mieux comprendre le texte, je dois réaliser un exposé et ceci est mon texte de base, je parle de la dernière voiture de la marque tesla le "model 3" qui est une voiture 100% électrique très populaire en ce moment).
Fiche pour tesla model 3
Qui a créé ?
Tesla is an amarican automarker, he Founded in 2003, the company specializes in electric cars. it is a first company to create a 100% electric cars with the Roadster I
Tesla motor was created by Martin Eberhard and Marc Tarpenning in 2003.
Model 3
the price of the “model S” is excessive for the general public the price of model S is 65’000
and the price of the model x is very excessive 109’880$.
The model 3 is a first tesla model « locost » this price is 35'000$ interessant for all people.
she has a 15-inch touch screen, and led lights , bluetooth and station wi-fi and she has an back caméra (caméra de recul).
we can choose the dimension of wheels 18 inch and 19 inch.
she has autopilot function, it is important for the futur of the cars because the model 3 it is a « locost car » this price is accessible to everyone and it has a technology top of line.
Technology :
The autopilot function is the big innovation of technology. this car is able to dirve alone. his diver can release his wheel. The car using the data of sensor for calculate the best ruling (she has ultrasonic sensors et infrared sensors), for to ride safely. This car can exceed and to park alone. whits this car to drive is easy.
The rear sensors haven a range of 50 meters and the front sensors haven a range of 250 metres.
Performance ?
she is able to accelerat from 0 to 60 in 5.1 seconds. it is a really the performances of sprot car.
she can browse 500 km with on charge.
Écologie ?
The ecology is more and more present in our life for example : the solar pannel or wind turbine,it’s important the use the green technology, she does not made co² because it is a electic car.
Price !
The price of car are more and more expencive year after years, the average car price in 2010 is 20000$ and the average price in 2017 is 26’000$.
The model 3 is not more expencive besause it is a electric car and the price per kilométer is less expensive than the thermic cars.
Merci pour votre aide, cordialement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2017 18:21
Message de clement555 posté le 28-12-2017 à 18:13:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je ne suis pas très fort en anglais; est-il possible de faire corriger ce teste
( pour mieux comprendre le texte, je dois réaliser un exposé et ceci est mon texte de base, je parle de la dernière voiture de la marque tesla le "model 3" qui est une voiture 100% électrique très populaire en ce moment).
Fiche pour tesla model 3
Qui a créé ?
Tesla is an amarican automarker, he Founded in 2003, the company specializes in electric cars. it is a first company to create a 100% electric cars with the Roadster I
Tesla motor was created by Martin Eberhard and Marc Tarpenning in 2003.
Model 3
the price of the “model S” is excessive for the general public the price of model S is 65’000
and the price of the model x is very excessive 109’880$.
The model 3 is a first tesla model « locost » this price is 35'000$ interessant for all people.
she has a 15-inch touch screen, and led lights , bluetooth and station wi-fi and she has an back caméra (caméra de recul).
we can choose the dimension of wheels 18 inch and 19 inch.
she has autopilot function, it is important for the futur of the cars because the model 3 it is a « locost car » this price is accessible to everyone and it has a technology top of line.
Technology :
The autopilot function is the big innovation of technology. this car is able to dirve alone. his diver can release his wheel. The car using the data of sensor for calculate the best ruling (she has ultrasonic sensors et infrared sensors), for to ride safely. This car can exceed and to park alone. whits this car to drive is easy.
The rear sensors haven a range of 50 meters and the front sensors haven a range of 250 metres.
Performance ?
she is able to accelerat from 0 to 60 in 5.1 seconds. it is a really the performances of sprot car.
she can browse 500 km with on charge.
Écologie ?
The ecology is more and more present in our life for example : the solar pannel or wind turbine,it’s important the use the green technology, she does not made co² because it is a electic car.
Price !
The price of car are more and more expencive year after years, the average car price in 2010 is 20000$ and the average price in 2017 is 26’000$.
The model 3 is not more expencive besause it is a electric car and the price per kilométer is less expensive than the thermic cars.
Merci pour votre aide, cordialement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2017 18:21
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