Lettre et forme en ing
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Message de chichitoptop posté le 28-11-2017 à 16:07:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour quelqu' un pourrait me dire si cette formulation est correcte? c est un extrait de lettre de motivation pour un stage et je voudrais éviter la forme Je (I)
My name is M, I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 (when) receiving my first camera. Travelling a lot with my parents, they gave me disposable cameras to document our trips.
ou faut il supprimer la forme en ing et obligatoirement passer par la forme Je?
My name is M. , I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 when I received my first camera. We used to travel a lot with my parents so they bought me disposable cameras to document our trips
merci d avance pour votre aide
Message de chichitoptop posté le 28-11-2017 à 16:07:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour quelqu' un pourrait me dire si cette formulation est correcte? c est un extrait de lettre de motivation pour un stage et je voudrais éviter la forme Je (I)
My name is M, I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 (when) receiving my first camera. Travelling a lot with my parents, they gave me disposable cameras to document our trips.
ou faut il supprimer la forme en ing et obligatoirement passer par la forme Je?
My name is M. , I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 when I received my first camera. We used to travel a lot with my parents so they bought me disposable cameras to document our trips
merci d avance pour votre aide
Réponse : Lettre et forme en ing de gerondif, postée le 28-11-2017 à 16:14:06 (S | E)
Bonjour
My name is M, I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 (when)after receiving my first camera. Travelling a lot with my parents, they gave me (they would give me / they used to give me) disposable cameras to document our trips.
Je préfère la deuxième.
My name is M., I'm a 20-year-old Belgian student in photography.
Photography is my passion, it all started at the age of 7 when I received my first camera. We(plutôt I , non, ou alors vous parlez de vos frères et soeurs) used to travel a lot with my parents (and they used to buy me /and they would buy me)so they bought me disposable cameras to document our trips.
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