When shall we meet/aide
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Message de jane37 posté le 30-10-2017 à 15:53:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis animatrice bénévole pour une association qui propose des cours d'anglais.Nous n'avons plus de professeur d'anglais ,aussi nous procédons à une autogestion et essayons d'apporter chacun le meilleur de nous-même.
Aujourd'hui je propose une prise de rendez-vous par téléphone. Pourriez-vous m'aider en vérifiant la cohérence et l'exactitude au niveau vocabulaire et grammaire ?
Je vous remercie.
Jane 37
When shall we meet?
Interviewer calls Tilly Parkins: Ring…Ring…
TP: Hello! Tilly parkins ‘s speaking
I: Good morning Miss parkins, I'm…………………..,
I'm a reporter at the CAJC for the monthly newspaper.
TP: Good morning, what can I do for you?
I: I would like to meet you for an interview about your last Rock climbing.
Would you be available the next week?
TP: Just a moment please, I ‘m looking on my diary …hum…
I would be available next Tuesday in the morning.
I: It's perfect, what time shall we meet in the morning?
TP: At nine it would be nice for me.
I: All right. Could you come to my office at the Clos Neuf?
TP: No problem. I know this place
I: Thank you very much Miss Parkins! So, we said: «Tuesday the fourteenth of October at nine, in the Pistache room on the first floor.
TP: It’s ok…I would be there, thank you for your suggestion.
I: It’s my pleasure Miss Parkins .Have a good day, see you next Tuesday .Good bye.
TP: Goodbye Mrs/Mr………….see you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-10-2017 16:38
Message de jane37 posté le 30-10-2017 à 15:53:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis animatrice bénévole pour une association qui propose des cours d'anglais.Nous n'avons plus de professeur d'anglais ,aussi nous procédons à une autogestion et essayons d'apporter chacun le meilleur de nous-même.
Aujourd'hui je propose une prise de rendez-vous par téléphone. Pourriez-vous m'aider en vérifiant la cohérence et l'exactitude au niveau vocabulaire et grammaire ?
Je vous remercie.
Jane 37
When shall we meet?
Interviewer calls Tilly Parkins: Ring…Ring…
TP: Hello! Tilly parkins ‘s speaking
I: Good morning Miss parkins, I'm…………………..,
I'm a reporter at the CAJC for the monthly newspaper.
TP: Good morning, what can I do for you?
I: I would like to meet you for an interview about your last Rock climbing.
Would you be available the next week?
TP: Just a moment please, I ‘m looking on my diary …hum…
I would be available next Tuesday in the morning.
I: It's perfect, what time shall we meet in the morning?
TP: At nine it would be nice for me.
I: All right. Could you come to my office at the Clos Neuf?
TP: No problem. I know this place
I: Thank you very much Miss Parkins! So, we said: «Tuesday the fourteenth of October at nine, in the Pistache room on the first floor.
TP: It’s ok…I would be there, thank you for your suggestion.
I: It’s my pleasure Miss Parkins .Have a good day, see you next Tuesday .Good bye.
TP: Goodbye Mrs/Mr………….see you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-10-2017 16:38
Réponse : When shall we meet/aide de gerondif, postée le 30-10-2017 à 18:27:12 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreur en bleu, suggestions en vert
When shall we meet?
Interviewer calls Tilly Parkins: Ring…Ring…
TP: Hello! Tilly parkins ‘s(à enlever) speaking
I: Good morning Miss Parkins, I'm…………………..,
I'm a reporter at the CAJC for the monthly newspaper.
TP: Good morning, what can I do for you?
I: I would like to meet you for an interview about your last rock climbing.
Would you be available the(à supprimer) next week?
TP: Just a moment please, I ‘m looking on (in) my diary …hum…
I would be available next Tuesday in the morning /next Tuesday morning.
I: It's perfect, what time shall we meet in the morning?
TP: At nine it would be nice for me.(pas le plus naturel) / Nine o' clock would be all right for me / nine would suit me fine.
I: All right. Could you come to my office at the Clos Neuf?
TP: No problem. I know this place. I know the place / I know where it's at.
I: Thank you very much Miss Parkins! So, we said(ne se dit guère pour récapituler.So, let me sum it up, just to be sure: «on Tuesday, the fourteenth of October at nine, in the Pistache room on the first floor.
TP: It’s ok(à tendance à signifier ça ne fait rien, ce n'est pas grave, préférer :That's right. On peut trouver it's okay with me, un peu familier) …I would(erreur! je serai là, j'y serai, c'est du futur !!) be there, thank you for your suggestion.(j'aurais plutôt parlé de "information" ou "directions")
I: It’s my pleasure Miss Parkins .Have a good day, see you next Tuesday .Good bye.
TP: Goodbye Mrs/Mr………….see you.
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