Corrigé /150 mots
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Message de thefrmontana posté le 22-10-2017 à 11:28:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un script à écrire en anglais qui doit présenter en 150 mots des aspects de mon université mais étant nul en anglais et ayant construit un texte avec plein d'expressions, j'ai peur de faire de très grosses erreurs de traduction. C'est pour cela que je viens vers vous afin qui vous puissiez me corriger.
The SIUAPS is a university service which suggest 46 athletics and artistics activities to the students of xxx and xxx. This activities can be lessons, training, theme stay, events, or futhermore competitions. All this is possible thanks to 36 facilities managed by the SIUAPS like football pitch or gymnasium. But the SIUAPS, beyond the sports side, can be help to make new friends too.
After a day at SIUAPS, you can take a drink with your new friends. That’s why there is a BDE which organize partys. This partys are sometimes theme party like Halloween or to celebrate events like after exam. This activites can allow students to make a new friends again and espacially to unwind. Because work is good but have fun is better. Also, to make sure that patys goes smoothly, the SIMPPS supply a kit to students to allow to have fun in safety.
Cordialement,
TheFrMontana
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-10-2017 14:00
Message de thefrmontana posté le 22-10-2017 à 11:28:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un script à écrire en anglais qui doit présenter en 150 mots des aspects de mon université mais étant nul en anglais et ayant construit un texte avec plein d'expressions, j'ai peur de faire de très grosses erreurs de traduction. C'est pour cela que je viens vers vous afin qui vous puissiez me corriger.
The SIUAPS is a university service which suggest 46 athletics and artistics activities to the students of xxx and xxx. This activities can be lessons, training, theme stay, events, or futhermore competitions. All this is possible thanks to 36 facilities managed by the SIUAPS like football pitch or gymnasium. But the SIUAPS, beyond the sports side, can be help to make new friends too.
After a day at SIUAPS, you can take a drink with your new friends. That’s why there is a BDE which organize partys. This partys are sometimes theme party like Halloween or to celebrate events like after exam. This activites can allow students to make a new friends again and espacially to unwind. Because work is good but have fun is better. Also, to make sure that patys goes smoothly, the SIMPPS supply a kit to students to allow to have fun in safety.
Cordialement,
TheFrMontana
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-10-2017 14:00
Réponse : Corrigé /150 mots de laure95, postée le 22-10-2017 à 15:56:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
The SIUAPS is a university service which suggest (faute de conjugaison + mettre un autre verbe plus adéquat pour des activités))46 athletics and artistics (pas de "s" à ces 2 mots car ils sont ici utilisés comme adjectif)activities to the students of xxx and xxx. This (this + singulier, chercher son équivalent au pluriel)activities can be lessons, training (mettre au pluriel), theme stay (pluriel), events, or futhermore (orthographe)competitions. All this is possible thanks to 36 facilities managed by the SIUAPS like football pitch or gymnasium (pluriel). But the SIUAPS, beyond the sports side, can be help (can be help: mal construit)to make new friends too.
After a day at SIUAPS, you can take (pas le bon verbe: on dit "have a drink")a drink with your new friends. That’s (mettre IS à la place de 's, cela te fera un mot en plus)why there is a BDE which organize (faute de conjugaison)partys orthographe, revoir la formation du pluriel des mots en "y" précédés d'une consonne). This (pluriel) partys (orthographe) are sometimes theme party (mettre au pluriel) like Halloween or to celebrate events like after exam (like after exam: mal dit). This (pluriel) activites can allow students to make a (pas de "a") new friends again and espacially (orthographe)to unwind. Because work(ing) is good but have (having pas have) fun is better. Also, to make sure that patys
goes (faute de conjugaison + mal dit)smoothly, the SIMPPS supply a kit to students to allow to have fun in safety.Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
