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Message de anais17 posté le 16-10-2017 à 18:45:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en seconde et j'ai un oral à faire sur une invention que je dois créer,seulement je suis nulle en anglais.
Pouvez-vous corrigermais mes fautes. Merci d'avance
I’m going to present you wattup.
What is this ?
It is a black housing. It is little housing . There are several size. The tallest is as tall as a packet of card. I don’t know what is it made .
Wattup is an invention for remolty charging phones, TV, device …
Wattup is connecting with a outlet .
You just should up this objet on your frame/painting or mirroirs. And it charge your device . It is also possible use this object for wifi .And it is really faster and essaier with wattup becausse we don’t need a endless passeword. Through a application in your phone, simply flash your phone in front of the housing and you are connecting to wifi.
You should buying wattup because it really faster and eassier than a classique outlet or calssique wifi. You can change place of your tv, your washing machine, your refrigerator…how you want. You don’t need to outlet. But the only fault of this invention is if you have a big house with several piece you should have several wattup for each piece. Conclusion this objet is really partice and you must acquire wattup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-10-2017 22:01
Message de anais17 posté le 16-10-2017 à 18:45:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en seconde et j'ai un oral à faire sur une invention que je dois créer,seulement je suis nulle en anglais.
Pouvez-vous corriger
I’m going to present you wattup.
What is this ?
It is a black housing. It is little housing . There are several size. The tallest is as tall as a packet of card. I don’t know what is it made .
Wattup is an invention for remolty charging phones, TV, device …
Wattup is connecting with a outlet .
You just should up this objet on your frame/painting or mirroirs. And it charge your device . It is also possible use this object for wifi .And it is really faster and essaier with wattup becausse we don’t need a endless passeword. Through a application in your phone, simply flash your phone in front of the housing and you are connecting to wifi.
You should buying wattup because it really faster and eassier than a classique outlet or calssique wifi. You can change place of your tv, your washing machine, your refrigerator…how you want. You don’t need to outlet. But the only fault of this invention is if you have a big house with several piece you should have several wattup for each piece. Conclusion this objet is really partice and you must acquire wattup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-10-2017 22:01
Réponse : Aide/ invention de sherry48, postée le 16-10-2017 à 21:42:21 (S | E)
Hello.
A very quick reading shows you can improve by using simple present tense, not be+verb+ing and checking all nouns to see if they should be plural. Make those corrections and post your corrections for further correction. Sherry
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