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Message de sarah971 posté le 30-09-2017 à 21:51:10 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Can you help me to correct my summary please ?
Thanks for any reply.
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from the Antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leader is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that economic world is constantly moving as a way that make it is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the differentiation of tactic and strategy. They are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions will have to be achieved in near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text stress that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work for and with a company is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to companies caracteristics.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2017 21:52
Message de sarah971 posté le 30-09-2017 à 21:51:10 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Can you help me to correct my summary please ?
Thanks for any reply.
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from the Antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leader is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that economic world is constantly moving as a way that make it is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the differentiation of tactic and strategy. They are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions will have to be achieved in near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text stress that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work for and with a company is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to companies caracteristics.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2017 21:52
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de laure95, postée le 02-10-2017 à 10:49:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- Indeed, it emphasizes that (article) economic world is constantly moving as a way that make (faute de conjugaison)it is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of (article)phenomenon.
- the differentiation
of (pas la bonne préposition)tactic and strategy. - They (they = ils / elles)are both manners to lead companies
- Tactic is used for actions (pronom relatif)will have to be achieved in (article)near future
- The text stress (faute de conjugaison) that
- companies caracteristics: mal construit.
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de sarah971, postée le 02-10-2017 à 11:24:59 (S | E)
Goodmorning !
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from the Antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leader is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that the economic world is constantly moving as a way that making it is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of the phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the difference between tactic and strategy. There are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions which will have to be achieved in a near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text stresses that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work for and with a company is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to the caracteristics of companies.
Thank you very much.
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de sarah971, postée le 03-10-2017 à 00:45:47 (S | E)
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from the Antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leadership is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that the economic world is constantly moving in such a way that success is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of the phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the difference between tactic and strategy. There are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions which will have to be achieved in a near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text points out that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work for and with a company is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to the caracteristics of companies.
Thank you very much.
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de bluestar, postée le 03-10-2017 à 17:19:01 (S | E)
hello...
Tactic.....usually plural
caracteristics...check spelling
the Antiquity...pas "the", pas majuscule
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de sarah971, postée le 03-10-2017 à 20:56:45 (S | E)
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leadership is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that the economic world is constantly moving in such a way that success is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of the phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the difference between tactic and strategy. There are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions which will have to be achieved in a near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text points out that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work for and with a company is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to the characteristics of companies.
Thank you very much.
Besides, in my text, the author uses "tactic"... So... I don't know what to do
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de bluestar, postée le 03-10-2017 à 22:25:19 (S | E)
hello...the plural seems to me more suitable in the context, but follow the text if you wish
For and with a company.....just say "in companies"
Réponse : Aide correction/résumé de sarah971, postée le 04-10-2017 à 20:37:54 (S | E)
To begin with, the first paragraph is about the definition of the term "strategy". It comes from antiquity and it was used in a military context meaning "leadership". Nowadays, "strategy" is commonly employed in an economic register as the unification of the goals to reach and the ways to apply in order to succeed.
Then, the second paragraph highlights the objectives of companies and explains that they have to respect some rules. Moreover, the strategy developed by a great leadership is essential to succeed in businesses. Indeed, it emphasizes that the economic world is constantly moving in such a way that success is going to be impossible without a proper analysis of the phenomenon.
The third paragraph deals with the difference between tactic and strategy. There are both manners to lead companies to success but they don't concern the same period. Tactic is used for actions which will have to be achieved in a near future whereas strategy concerns more the way to think about the prospects of firms.
The fourth paragraph is about the different ways to manage a business. The text points out that communication is highly linked to success. Indeed, listening to people who work in companies is very important because it helps to understand the market. Besides, the text highlights the fact that there are several management styles according to the characteristics of companies.
Thank you very much.
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