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Message de sarah971 posté le 09-09-2017 à 00:34:10 (S | E | F)
Good morning/afternoon/evening !
Can you help me to correct my summary please ? It is divided into three parts because there is three articles to summarize
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The first article deals with the reasons which urge people to set up their own company as well as those who have been successful in businness such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or also Richard Branson. Thanks to their hardwork and appetite for risks, they have succeeded to found the biggest companies off the world .
Then, we have an article which gives us some essentials conditions to make it in business. For instance, it underlines necessary qualities like courage, optimism and entreprenarial spirit. Unfortunately, it mentions the fact that an huge part of people who have decided to establish a company cannot reach theirs objectives due to various reasons. Besides, the article highlights that failure is not stigmatized in the U.S.A. On the contrary, it explains us that taking risks is highly encouraged over there. Also, american's entrepreneurial crulture is spreading in France with the passing years in such a manner that most of young people are creating their own job because of unemployment. Moreover, they are jobs poviders which is making them such heroes.
The third article explains how to proceed in order to start a business in United Kingdom and also the differents ways to financiate it.
Thank you for your help
Message de sarah971 posté le 09-09-2017 à 00:34:10 (S | E | F)
Good morning/afternoon/evening !
Can you help me to correct my summary please ? It is divided into three parts because there is three articles to summarize
... The first article deals with the reasons which urge people to set up their own company as well as those who have been successful in businness such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or also Richard Branson. Thanks to their hardwork and appetite for risks, they have succeeded to found the biggest companies off the world .
Then, we have an article which gives us some essentials conditions to make it in business. For instance, it underlines necessary qualities like courage, optimism and entreprenarial spirit. Unfortunately, it mentions the fact that an huge part of people who have decided to establish a company cannot reach theirs objectives due to various reasons. Besides, the article highlights that failure is not stigmatized in the U.S.A. On the contrary, it explains us that taking risks is highly encouraged over there. Also, american's entrepreneurial crulture is spreading in France with the passing years in such a manner that most of young people are creating their own job because of unemployment. Moreover, they are jobs poviders which is making them such heroes.
The third article explains how to proceed in order to start a business in United Kingdom and also the differents ways to financiate it.
Thank you for your help
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de lucile83, postée le 09-09-2017 à 21:51:35 (S | E)
Anyone please? Réponse : Correction/ résumé de here4u, postée le 09-09-2017 à 22:14:15 (S | E)
HELLO !
Can you help me to correct my summary please ? It is divided into three parts because there is three articles to summarize ...
The first article deals with the reasons which urge people to set up their own company as well as those who have been successful in businness such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or also Richard Branson. Thanks to their hardwork and appetite for risks, they have succeeded to found (= managed to found / succeeded in founding) the biggest companies off the world .
Then, we have an article which gives us some essentials conditions to make it in business. For instance, it underlines necessary qualities like courage, optimism and entreprenarial spirit. Unfortunately, it mentions the fact that an huge part of people who have decided to establish a company cannot reach theirs objectives due to various reasons. Besides, the article highlights that failure is not stigmatized in the U.S.A. On the contrary, it explains us that taking risks is highly encouraged over there. Also, american's entrepreneurial crulture is spreading in France with the passing years in such a manner that most of young people are creating their own jobS because of unemployment. Moreover, they are jobs poviders which is making them such heroes.
The third article explains how to proceed in order to start a business in THE United Kingdom and also the differents ways to financiate it.
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de sarah971, postée le 10-09-2017 à 13:49:24 (S | E)
The first article deals with the reasons which urge people to set up their own company as well as those who have been successful in business such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or also Richard Branson. Thanks to their hard work and appetite for risks, they have succeeded in founding the biggest companies in the world .
Then, we have an article which gives us some essential conditions to make it in business. For instance, it underlines necessary qualities like courage, optimism and entrepreneurial spirit. Unfortunately, it mentions the fact that a huge part of people who have decided to establish a company cannot reach their objectives due to various reasons. Besides, the article highlights that failure is not stigmatized in the U.S.A. On the contrary, it explains that taking risks is highly encouraged over there. Also, American entrepreneurial culture is spreading in France with the passing years in such a manner that most young people are creating their own jobs because of unemployment. Moreover, they are jobs providers which is making them such heroes.
The third article explains how to proceed in order to start a business in the United Kingdom and also the different ways to finance it.
Thank you for your help
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de bluestar, postée le 10-09-2017 à 15:31:10 (S | E)
Hello..
"explain" is not a reflexive verb in English, so we don't "explain us"..that is, the subject and object are not the same.
Some misspellings...poviders, entreprenarial, (this one is also spelled correctly elsewhere), differents (no s at tend of the plural of adjectives)...
'Hardwork' is two words not one..american is an adjective of nationality and should start with a capital letter
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de sarah971, postée le 11-09-2017 à 02:12:30 (S | E)
The first article deals with the reasons which urge people to set up their own company as well as those who have been successful in business such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or also Richard Branson. Thanks to their hard work and appetite for risks, they have succeeded in founding the biggest companies in the world .
Then, we have an article which gives us some essential conditions to make it in business. For instance, it underlines necessary qualities like courage, optimism and entrepreneurial spirit. Unfortunately, it mentions the fact that a huge part of people who have decided to establish a company cannot reach their objectives due to various reasons. Besides, the article highlights that failure is not stigmatized in the U.S.A. On the contrary, it explains that taking risks is highly encouraged over there. Also, American entrepreneurial culture is spreading in France with the passing years in such a manner that most young people are creating their own jobs because of unemployment. Moreover, they are jobs providers which is making them such heroes.
The third article explains how to proceed in order to start a business in the United Kingdom and also the different ways to finance it.
Thank you for your help
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