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Message de roty posté le 17-08-2017 à 23:27:05
Bonjour,
J'aimerais avoir une correction de ma candidature pour aller en Australie dans une famille d’accueil au mois de septembre. J'aimerais, de plus, avoir un avis sur ma candidature au cas où il manque des éléments. Merci d'avance.
Dear future host family,
My name is *****, I'm 19 and I live in a small village near to ***** in France. I am in search of a family of acceuil living in Australia to learn the local cultures and well évidement the langage.
I have just just ended my studies to the high school after the obtaining of my Scientist baccalaureate diploma. I have a big passion for wild animals or not.
In 19 years, I have to chain some casual jobs.
I have to work 2 French-style weeks of the Games, 2 weeks to Carrefour. Since these holidays I work on DisneyLand in the posage of pavement. Since these holidays I work on DisneyLand in the posage of pavement.
I am really exited to meet you and to see your country. First of all, I really think that this travel will be very useful for my future life, it will help me to understand new things in my life, new ways to understand it and to learn English.
I've never been in Australia before but I always dream to.
About me, I do a lot of sport, for example, the running, the football, the tennis, the Athletics, the handball and the judo.
I am a young man full of joy of life and overflowing with energy.
I'm curious, volunteer, greedy, adventurer and hardworker.
Cordialy
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-08-2017 06:20
Vous aviez posté le même texte puis vous l'avez supprimé et vous le repostez....
Nous ne corrigeons pas les traductions automatiques.
Message de roty posté le 17-08-2017 à 23:27:05
Bonjour,
J'aimerais avoir une correction de ma candidature pour aller en Australie dans une famille d’accueil au mois de septembre. J'aimerais, de plus, avoir un avis sur ma candidature au cas où il manque des éléments. Merci d'avance.
Dear future host family,
My name is *****, I'm 19 and I live in a small village near to ***** in France. I am in search of a family of acceuil living in Australia to learn the local cultures and well évidement the langage.
I have just just ended my studies to the high school after the obtaining of my Scientist baccalaureate diploma. I have a big passion for wild animals or not.
In 19 years, I have to chain some casual jobs.
I have to work 2 French-style weeks of the Games, 2 weeks to Carrefour. Since these holidays I work on DisneyLand in the posage of pavement. Since these holidays I work on DisneyLand in the posage of pavement.
I am really exited to meet you and to see your country. First of all, I really think that this travel will be very useful for my future life, it will help me to understand new things in my life, new ways to understand it and to learn English.
I've never been in Australia before but I always dream to.
About me, I do a lot of sport, for example, the running, the football, the tennis, the Athletics, the handball and the judo.
I am a young man full of joy of life and overflowing with energy.
I'm curious, volunteer, greedy, adventurer and hardworker.
Cordialy
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-08-2017 06:20
Vous aviez posté le même texte puis vous l'avez supprimé et vous le repostez....
Nous ne corrigeons pas les traductions automatiques.
Réponse : Correction/candidature de gerondif, postée le 18-08-2017 à 01:02:09
Bonjour
Vous avez dû faire ça au traducteur automatique parce que les mots mal orthographiés comme acceuil ou évidement sont restés non traduits car non reconnus.
Votre traduction de "deux semaines à la Française des Jeux" vaut le détour.
